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Give Me Some Space

Distra t me from woes in your wonderful way Tell me the secr ts I forget by the next day As my steps carry me forw rd, allow me to . As it all gets too m ch, I just need to flop

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Sand Blown

Date: 8/22/2023 12:20:00 PM

...miss-ink letters....c, e, a, u.....'cooked- easy and understood'......stan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/22/2023 1:35:00 PM

Celebrate each ally unerringly :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/22/2023 8:56:00 AM

D, this is exactly how my husband types and re-reading it he sees no wrong. Your thoughtful verse depicts a stage of life where space is needed and "flopping" for a while is a much needed good thing. Nothing could have depicted a worn out tired mind better than you just did. This is a fave for me. Well done D.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/22/2023 9:30:00 AM

Thank you SV, it's beautiful that something like this can be interpreted differently. Thank you for sharing x

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 8/22/2023 7:43:00 AM

Never saw this done.Kool !

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/22/2023 8:48:00 AM

I made a typo on the first line and liked it as I'd just chatted to a friend and felt problem free for a while and the missing letters felt a bit like how I left my worries outside of the chat x

Tom Woody

Date: 8/22/2023 7:02:00 AM

I like the creativity here

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/22/2023 7:12:00 AM

Very kind of you to say, thank you