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What of ... a Pearl Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Craig Cornish 05/23/24

Johannes Vermeer
Girl with a Pearl Earring

I’m struck by the stark contrast of her image which leaps out against a black background Meeting the gaze of her piercing blue eyes I find her so beautiful much more alluring than the Mona Lisa A colourful teal and gold turban hides her tresses perhaps giving emphasis to a solitary pearl earring which skims the collar of her gown Her enigmatic expression hides a secret Parted ruby red lips are poised as if to speak yet, they will never reveal her identity

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/15/2024 6:56:00 PM

Precious Jan. She's not ready to be exposed. :)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2024 7:01:00 AM

Ah, so different to the limericks that I usually head straight for - so glad I read this thoughtful piece, my friend x

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/3/2024 1:43:00 PM

Hi Jan! I just knew this would be a winner when I first read it! While I love your humor that brightens my day, this poem exposes the pearl of your more serious writing abilities! High fives, dear friend! Congratulations on your win. Keep them coming! Hugs and blessings!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/1/2024 6:02:00 AM

Very well done, dear. Both your poem and the painting great works of art. Big hugs

Joseph May

Date: 5/30/2024 3:10:00 AM

You describe this work of art well Jan, Best wishes in the Contest

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/29/2024 11:20:00 AM

Really wonderful, Jan. This is exquisite poetic expression. If this is for Craig's contest, best wishes. It is wonderfully written. I think you have captured the mystery in the expression of the girl. Blessings and hugs.

James Peranteau

Date: 5/27/2024 6:26:00 PM

p.s. jan, mine aspire; even az the young man, haz been, "to be the proud listed "caretaker", on the provenances uv any "oil" uv Johannes Vermeer...eXspecially uv this oil! Ohhh, you have made mine day dear poet!

James Peranteau

Date: 5/27/2024 6:07:00 PM

my precious poet; az the many who are captivated by the amaze uv Mona Lisa, i, the works uv "Vermeer's" oil medium! Likewise, hiz adore uv the feminine. Hiz muse's were in the strokes uv their quills{my believe}'side, if you see, their beauty. If 'they' where in sight uv hiz brush and canvas, 'he' wuz in their sight, lisping uv he 'pon their slips. ;) oh yess, several uv hiz oils were uv the feminine writing. p.s...an artist's greatest werks are from experience ') (though he may have used hiz daughter az the model uv "the girl with the pearl earring", I have the artist's intuition that he did so hiding true from hiz wife, likewise adultery wuz a prison sentence back when! le poete fait un clin d'oeil....much love Jan ')

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/25/2024 1:55:00 AM

Johannes Vermeer has inspired my poems on this famous painting. Mona Lisa has her allure too. But to each, his own.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/25/2024 1:02:00 AM

Loved this poem Jan!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/24/2024 10:21:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write for a lovely painting. Both Are Great.... "Good Luck" Have a great day/weekend.....................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/24/2024 6:33:00 AM

I guess this could have been listed as an ekphrasis also. I love your apt description. You emphasize the portrait in a way that draws more attention to each detail. (fyi…my sis now has your book…I also gave her Robert Gorelick’s pet limerick book…she works so hard and I think both books will relax her, bring her much laughter…she loves humor and I often thought she should be on stage) Hugs ~ Kim (Faving your poem)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2024 7:07:00 AM

I hope you had a peek at the book too Kim! I am working on the second one now - my heart isnt on soup, so many wrongs that admin don't deal with, especially system errors when you try and enter a contest. I have re classified it as ekphrasis - thanks for your advice:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/24/2024 6:13:00 AM

Dear Jan, How captivating! The word you create brings the enigmatic beauty of the painting to life, evoking a sense of intrigue and wonder in me. The way you dig into her expression and the hidden depths within her gaze is truly mesmerizing. Your words have a timeless allure, much like the subject of the painting itself. Brilliant work. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2024 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, I thought I would think outside the box for the contest, it is such a wonderful painting, i saw it many years ago on a visit to the Netherlands, the contest was the only one that inspired me to pick up my pen:-) hugs Jan xx

Arlo Parker

Date: 5/23/2024 10:29:00 PM

Muted colors allow her eyes and pearl earring to "pop". The last line is key: her identity, nor her thoughts. :o)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2024 7:09:00 AM

it would be wonderful to know who she was! hugs jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/23/2024 5:42:00 PM

I've always loved that painting, and your beautifully captured her essence. I agree...she's way more captivating than the Mona Lisa. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2024 7:10:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by sweet Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/23/2024 1:14:00 PM

it is a beautiful painting, jan, and you've captured her so well in this poem...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2024 1:43:00 PM

do look out for the film it is compelling watching not least because it stars Colin Firth lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2024 12:56:00 PM

- Perfect description... best wishes in the contest, Jan :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2024 1:42:00 PM

thanks Anne- Lise:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/23/2024 12:37:00 PM

A Vermeer how splendid Jan, I agree she looks a lot better than Moany Lisa, way overrated imho, I wonder what the secret is she hides, I best not go there lol! A fine piece for the contest, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2024 1:42:00 PM

its a wonderful painting David, not sure if Craig will like my take on pearl but so be it:-) hugs jan xx

Girl with a pearl earring

Johannes Vermeer Girl with a Pearl Earring

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Girl with a Pearl Earring