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What of ... a Pearl Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Craig Cornish 05/23/24

Johannes Vermeer
Girl with a Pearl Earring

Girl with a pearl earring

I’m struck by the stark contrast
of her image
which leaps out
against a black background

Meeting the gaze
of her piercing blue eyes
I find her so beautiful
much more alluring than the Mona Lisa

A colourful teal and gold turban
hides her tresses
perhaps giving emphasis
to a solitary pearl earring
which skims the collar of her gown

Her enigmatic expression
hides a secret

Parted ruby red lips
are poised
as if to speak
yet,
they will never reveal her identity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Nice take and description of The Pearl Earring. That's a good question. I wonder what she is about to say?
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 6:56 PM
Precious Jan. She's not ready to be exposed. :)
Horne Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Ah, so different to the limericks that I usually head straight for - so glad I read this thoughtful piece, my friend x
Kauffman Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 1:43 PM
Hi Jan! I just knew this would be a winner when I first read it! While I love your humor that brightens my day, this poem exposes the pearl of your more serious writing abilities! High fives, dear friend! Congratulations on your win. Keep them coming! Hugs and blessings!
Manassian Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 6:02 AM
Very well done, dear. Both your poem and the painting great works of art. Big hugs
May Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 3:10 AM
You describe this work of art well Jan, Best wishes in the Contest
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Really wonderful, Jan. This is exquisite poetic expression. If this is for Craig's contest, best wishes. It is wonderfully written. I think you have captured the mystery in the expression of the girl. Blessings and hugs.
Peranteau Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 6:26 PM
p.s. jan, mine aspire; even az the young man, haz been, "to be the proud listed "caretaker", on the provenances uv any "oil" uv Johannes Vermeer...eXspecially uv this oil! Ohhh, you have made mine day dear poet!
Peranteau Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 6:07 PM
my precious poet; az the many who are captivated by the amaze uv Mona Lisa, i, the works uv "Vermeer's" oil medium! Likewise, hiz adore uv the feminine. Hiz muse's were in the strokes uv their quills{my believe}'side, if you see, their beauty. If 'they' where in sight uv hiz brush and canvas, 'he' wuz in their sight, lisping uv he 'pon their slips. ;) oh yess, several uv hiz oils were uv the feminine writing. p.s...an artist's greatest werks are from experience ') (though he may have used hiz daughter az the model uv "the girl with the pearl earring", I have the artist's intuition that he did so hiding true from hiz wife, likewise adultery wuz a prison sentence back when! le poete fait un clin d'oeil....much love Jan ')
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Johannes Vermeer has inspired my poems on this famous painting. Mona Lisa has her allure too. But to each, his own.
Vaso Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 1:02 AM
Loved this poem Jan!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 10:21 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write for a lovely painting. Both Are Great.... "Good Luck" Have a great day/weekend.....................
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:33 AM
I guess this could have been listed as an ekphrasis also. I love your apt description. You emphasize the portrait in a way that draws more attention to each detail. (fyi…my sis now has your book…I also gave her Robert Gorelick’s pet limerick book…she works so hard and I think both books will relax her, bring her much laughter…she loves humor and I often thought she should be on stage) Hugs ~ Kim (Faving your poem)
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 7:07 AM
I hope you had a peek at the book too Kim! I am working on the second one now - my heart isnt on soup, so many wrongs that admin don't deal with, especially system errors when you try and enter a contest. I have re classified it as ekphrasis - thanks for your advice:-) hugs jan xx
Rodgers Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Dear Jan, How captivating! The word you create brings the enigmatic beauty of the painting to life, evoking a sense of intrigue and wonder in me. The way you dig into her expression and the hidden depths within her gaze is truly mesmerizing. Your words have a timeless allure, much like the subject of the painting itself. Brilliant work. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Thanks Daniel, I thought I would think outside the box for the contest, it is such a wonderful painting, i saw it many years ago on a visit to the Netherlands, the contest was the only one that inspired me to pick up my pen:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:14 PM
it is a beautiful painting, jan, and you've captured her so well in this poem...
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:43 PM
do look out for the film it is compelling watching not least because it stars Colin Firth lol:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:56 PM
- Perfect description... best wishes in the contest, Jan :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:42 PM
thanks Anne- Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:37 PM
A Vermeer how splendid Jan, I agree she looks a lot better than Moany Lisa, way overrated imho, I wonder what the secret is she hides, I best not go there lol! A fine piece for the contest, cheers David
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:42 PM
its a wonderful painting David, not sure if Craig will like my take on pearl but so be it:-) hugs jan xx
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