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Poetry/Rhyme/Girl On The Tram
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1576-524-05
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 05, 2023
For the International Contest, Voice
Sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 09/25/2023

Art prints by Paul Fischer

It was the early days of the electric tram, the cars could hold twenty people only; much less when there were mothers with a pram, often, I saw people who looked quite lonely ! I was dressed up in my new frock and hat, the reason for this trip was my birthday; on the bench seating mom and auntie sat, I stood as the tram would bounce and sway ! I loved watching the downtown scenes going by, we (Mom and Auntie) were going shopping; on this lovely, beautiful, sunny day in July, oh, some of the things I saw were quite eye-popping ! I seldom had a chance to go downtown, sometimes, the tram would slow down then speed up; when we arrived I wanted to see all the stores around, then, we would have tea served in a fancy cup ! A man holding a cute pup was not allowed on, and an old man was stopped who looked real poor; I paid the three cents so the old man could come-on, the conductor said- I was a nice girl and a real kind-doer !

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Date: 9/25/2023 11:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem...lovely described, Constance :) - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2023 11:12:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, hugs.
Date: 9/24/2023 11:23:00 PM
I really love how you reclaimed the 'old school' morality and kindness, Constance. Congratulations :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2023 11:12:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the nice comment and congratulations.
Date: 9/24/2023 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. I love your poem. I like that you incorporated kindness. Many blessings to you
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2023 11:13:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, I have always tried to be kind.
Date: 9/8/2023 8:24:00 AM
This is a lovely story, Constance, penned with great imagery and real insightfulness along with super rhyme and flow. Blessings , Gordon
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2023 4:01:00 PM
Gordon, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, blessings.

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