Girl of Mine

When I first saw her 
She was only a few hours old 
Instinctively kicking her long legs 
Howling 
To escape 
I knew then 
She was 
A fighter. 

Attracted  
To an old drawer 
I found 
Faded photos 
Forgotten pieces 
Of crumpled notepaper 
Their energy 
Taking me back 
To a time when 
Her hair was brownish gold 
Round face 
Took baths in a yellow tub 
Cradled in the kitchen sink 
And cried 
When her mother 
Worked on weekends. 

Eyes closed 
I remembered 
When she was seven or eight 
I would read to her 
While she played 
With her dolls 
Occasionally stopping 
To look up at me 
With her big brown eyes 
One night she asked 
Daddy do I have any friends? 
I told her she had many friends 
Imaginary friends too 
Like Ooh Poo Poo Doo 
Who would always be with her 
That’s a strange name Daddy, she said 
Brushing the hair 
From her eyes 
I said 
It’s not the name or how you say it 
It’s the friend that counts. 

One Spring day 
She came back home 
Tall 
Well dressed 
Confident 
Her friends crowded the living room 
As my wife and I left 
I smiled 
Remebering the words
It’s not the name or how you say it 
It’s the friend that counts. 
Words 
My daughter 
Kept in her heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 19, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Edmund,, Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd
Bailey Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Congradulations Edmund that your poem is featured this week. This made me think about my eldest daughter. You with such ease and heart. God Bless, Avis
Bailey Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 4:07 PM
You write with such ease and heart. Avis
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February 13, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations on being featured by Poetry Soup this week...............S.Ronthorpe.
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February 13, 2012 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Edmund. Love, Carol
Ginn Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 12:52 PM
This touched me so deeply. Right now I have a house full of teenagers and love the too loud laughter and occassional sounds of furniture moving. I know soon, way too soon another chapter will unfold but right now Im making more memories for my drawers. Thanks Edmond. Laurie
Lohrey Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Awwww! This is so sweet, I bet you are the best dad ever! Great poem, it shares such preciouse memories and allows the reader to see into your beautiful heart. Thanks for sharing :)
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