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Girl, I'M Wishing

She's writing again God, how I love her pen That hand can make a man tremble Her script today about the sea So jealous, wishing it were me Just seeing her name And I'm falling to pieces I can't shake the feeling Or stop myself from reeling Captivated by her heart Paradise abides within her soul All of her, an unrelenting goal She's got words that make me fly Again today, time stood still Can love's belief make it all real Just seeing her name And I'm falling to pieces I can't shake the feeling Or stop myself from reeling Captivated by her heart I know it sounds crazy to say Whispering her lines, I think today These words written about the sea I'm dreaming of how it could be If this girl's really thinking about me Girl, I'm wishing... Wishing you're thinking about me Girl, I'm wishing... Wishing for a you and me! ~Lyric Man Note: I wanted to write a song about that wishing feeling. Those things going on inside so many of us. Things we can't or won't ever say out loud. Because it's just fantasy, right? Or could there actually be more... What if this girl is thinking about me while I thinking about her?!?! So just for fun, if you think this write is really about you.. you just might be right!! The tension of the unknown is intoxicating.. so drink up my friends!

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Greg Gaul

Date: 7/7/2018 8:40:00 PM

You're one talented and clever dude. Reading your comments is most entertaining too and helps me get a handle on you. There is much yet to learn. Ain't it fun?

Rosemary Bryerton-Schiff

Date: 7/5/2018 6:45:00 PM

I really like this poem...a lot. The flow, the wish the longing. I feel each and every word.

Karen Da

Date: 7/5/2018 5:07:00 PM

Poetry is just a great way to express emotions especially the concealed ones. And this one's a beautiful example. Nicely done!

Marc Acrich

Date: 7/5/2018 10:20:00 AM

i like it, just remember the slower you write the deeper you pull from, I think thats the trick i saw Rod Mcuen, slow talker, slow everything, what if im on to something , i use to write very fast but im on some meds slow me down to normal

Tswarelo Mohohoma

Date: 7/2/2018 4:33:00 PM

Wow!!! It is indeed a sweet song, lyrics to be performing softly from the heart, well done!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/25/2018 10:04:00 AM

Oh He's writing again..and God I still love his pen...:)Lovely poem dear friend...Each of your poems a song.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/24/2018 10:06:00 AM

How magical... makes you think of the sea... and lighthouses. Wishes and dreams...all sweet.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/24/2018 1:23:00 AM

It is nice to start the day with this heart cheering write! That's true readers whatever age and state of heart identify with these beautiful noble human feelings and thoughts! We never blame the heart to fall, but the mind will be responsible for it all! I enjoyed reading your Lyric, Lyric Man! Thank you for sharing. Stay safe.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/23/2018 1:42:00 PM

She sounds so dreamy and romantic. I am sure she is thinking of you, and her heart is smiling, after feeling your words. I like the way your thoughts play. :) This is beautiful. ~ Maia

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/23/2018 1:26:00 AM

What a surprise, is so nice to see you back, I wont even say I loved this poem, I will say I love em all! cheers

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 5:52:00 PM

Oh lyric man, you are up to your teasing tricks again. I , for one, know it's not about me. Maybe I should search about for sea poems today!! Very nice and very lyrical!!

Lyric Man
Date: 6/22/2018 6:09:00 PM

Now Andrea, I'm just writing about feelings and want to do it in a way where anyone can see themselves in the song. You won't find a write about the sea that teased me.. I took a liberty there to hide my true love.. JK. By the way, never ever count yourself out of inspiring a romantic pen. You've got everything you need and more!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2018 5:23:00 PM

when the heavens created sweet romance, you were on the front row, D... as the lyrics go, ' incredible, that's what you are!'...huggs

Lyric Man
Date: 6/22/2018 5:40:00 PM

Only an Angel would have such exclusive intel :). When you're sitting for the best show in the universe it's good to be in the front row. I see a few familiar pens up here with me girl!

Janis Thompson

Date: 6/22/2018 5:17:00 PM

You must love someone on PS very much. You are truly a romantic poet. Nice write. Good that you can express you feelings so well.

Lyric Man
Date: 6/22/2018 5:26:00 PM

Nope.. my true love isn't in the Soup. That would be crazy right? Or would it... Its the weekend. A time when belief and romance most often wed. So have a drink on me and toast to possibilities :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2018 5:10:00 PM

A sweet, romantic depiction adorned with lots of fun..enjoyed reading it..even your note at the bottom! Teasing words, lyric Man!

Lyric Man
Date: 6/22/2018 5:30:00 PM

Vijay, you've perfectly captured the essence of what I was chasing with my pen. Personally, I'm still completely taken by my incredible wife.. but my pen reminds me often that he's still free ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/22/2018 3:53:00 PM

with the wonderful lyrics that you write I think there are several who are wishing there's a 'you and me' ... I see you were inspired by the poem I sent you today lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lyric Man
Date: 6/22/2018 5:34:00 PM

What.. you want to completely humiliate me, Jan? You know I'm a simple PG kinda guy :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2018 4:47:00 PM

lol can I post it? hugs jan xx

Lyric Man
Date: 6/22/2018 4:03:00 PM

Ha :) ..that was truly something!