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Gimme a Brake

A UFO went to land in Dakota
But the brakes didn't work one iota.
        It didn't take long
        to decide what was wrong
seems the space ship was made by Toyota!

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Funom Makama

March 21, 2016 at 11:56 AM

I choke with so much of your owe from this wonderful piece. You are a gem and blessed talent. Keep it up.

Richard Breese

September 23, 2014 at 11:00 PM

Very good limerick.

Kim M

April 6, 2010 at 12:11 AM

That's perfect! Fantastic!

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 5, 2010 at 5:56 AM

Congrats for the win. Very funny and well penned

Debbie Guzzi

March 25, 2010 at 5:07 PM

oh my my oh hell yes! G R E A T and timely too! who's #1 why YOU! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

March 24, 2010 at 3:30 PM

GREAT limerick. I see why you won! LUv, Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 23, 2010 at 4:26 AM

Your limerick is, “Out of this World!” Congratulations Ralph, on your OUTstanding win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. I’m doubling over with laughter! I must say, it is a fun way to start the day. (Sad about the real Toyotas, though.) Laughingly, Dane Ann

Bill Frew

March 22, 2010 at 8:21 PM

Great write,funny stuff that!thanx

Mitch White

March 22, 2010 at 7:20 AM

Very FUNNY stuff- Congrats

John Freeman

March 21, 2010 at 11:06 AM

Awesome win Ralph, Congratulations on a well deserved win. Agape, Moses

Caryl Muzzey

March 21, 2010 at 10:08 AM

Congratulation on winning first place. A great write! Caryl

Tim Ryerson

March 20, 2010 at 11:20 AM

Belly-laughin' funny!... Congrats on the first place win Ralph!... However, I gotta' go you one better...if it had been a Chevy (I call mine my 'Limo-Lemon') it would never have MADE it to Dakota! - Tim

Robert A. Dufresne

March 20, 2010 at 9:56 AM

hahaheehee Yes! Good one Ralph. kCan see why this won uno. Congrats-Robert

Sue Mason

March 20, 2010 at 9:14 AM

Very timely and well done here, Ralph. Congratulations on your win in Caroline's contest and Welcome to PoetrySoup !! I look forward to reading more of your writing soon.

Jessica Arteaga

March 19, 2010 at 11:16 PM

congrats fun lime!

Joyce Johnson

March 19, 2010 at 4:46 PM

Congratulations on your first place win with this up to the minute limerick. Joyce

James Marshall Goff

March 19, 2010 at 2:59 PM

am chuckling! Ralph! original work! congrats on your well deserved first place win! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 19, 2010 at 1:27 PM

A very big congrats Ralph on your first place win in the Limerick contest.. such a cool write and luv that Toyota reference.. although I luv my little Toyota Echo.. I posted a LEMON-rick on Matt Caliri's blog about Toyota just for fun per Matt's request if u care to check it out... great win for u Ralph..enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"