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Gift of Life Collab

Life is wondrous gift from the main breath Source Love-wrapped for meaningful existence-worth Packed with grace and mercy of divine force Bringing great surprises midst hopeful mirth. God offers eternal life* indeed blest Assuring triumph against trials’ blow… Trusting HIM Who does grant faith’s earnest quest I thank the Lord while sharing life’s peace-glow. **This gift is bestowed with kindness and love Shown on the cross, where Christ was crucified By His death, made alive, grateful thereof Promised His forever presence to guide Using this life to live for His glory Witnessing boldly His Spirit's leading Yielding full to Him till head turns hoary I sing His praise, with prayer proceeding.**
*Romans 6:23 …The gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord. **Third and fourth stanzas are from Joanna Daniel. Rhyme scheme is ABAB and checked with rhymezone.com; 10 syllables/line and checked with howmanysyllables.com March 29, 2023 4th place, "Collaborate With Me" Rhyme Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Joanna Daniel; judged on 3/30/2023

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Date: 3/30/2023 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Beta on your winning write. Life is truly a gift:)
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Date: 3/30/2023 7:55:00 AM
Hi Beta, Jo's verses meshed well with yours. Well done. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/30/2023 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Beata! :)
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:22:00 AM
Hi Beata, I knew this one was a winner as soon as I saw it, had to collaborate with you, it was fun and thanks for participating:) congratulations:)
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