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Ghostly Foot Prints

GHOSTLY FOOT PRINTS Ghostly soldiers echo past Through snow-capped mountains They must blast, Through uninhabitable surroundings Enabling them to weave, Trying not to ever leave Evidence of them been there, Through, rugged dangerous Terrain, a path, Marching toward an enemy Full, of long felt wrath! Like ghosts, not a sound is heard, A broken piece of brass Which they just bypass, Years later is found, Laying half hidden in Snowy ground! This medal was once worn With pride, Left, trodden over, as they slide, Down sleet and snow 5 foot deep, To surprise, the enemy whilst They sleep! This battle they are ordered To win, Knowing that most of them Are kin! Surprise they did, and bravely fought And shed much blood, As through trenches full Of snow and mud, They plodded, and crawled And run and killed And felt appalled, As fellow soldiers and Kin lay sprawled, For orders had to be obeyed, No matter who was lost, Or Saved. They knew this was not right, They had by far, the strongest might! Today, these silhouettes go forth With Ghost like face, Souls sad, their march is Now a heart sore pace, They breeze by with an icy feel, Rubbing shoulders with them Feels real, We shiver at the very thought, That all this bloody battle brought Was shame and guilt, at how They’d won, Perhaps killing their own father, Brother or perhaps son. You’ll sense these ghostly faces, On a chilly snowy, icy night, When the moon is bright, Leaving footprints to remind Us all, Never should soldiers fight And fall, For land, wealth or ideals, Or for glory, Leaving behind a sad, sad story!

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Date: 11/20/2018 1:26:00 AM
War, fighting, bleeding, dying and you ask yourself "What was accomplished..." If only humanity could be more loving and peaceful, we would not need to fight. Kim
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/17/2018 7:52:00 AM
Hi Kim, And not in today's world only, but from the beginning of time man has fought and killed his fellow men. Great you stopped by, xoxo, Jennifer.
Date: 11/18/2018 1:06:00 PM
Haunting imagery and sombre cadence. Nicely penned, Jennifer! :) gw
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/19/2018 9:43:00 AM
Hi Gershon, I enjoy rhyming my poems and wanted this one to come across as a little, if not a lot, haunting! Imagine the trauma and chaos in wars or battles - the dead lying everywhere, blasts, one after the next - confusion must absolutely reign - i'm sure that my ghosts in the poem were and trying to find The way! Best wishes, Jennifer.
Date: 11/17/2018 5:47:00 PM
G'day Jennifer … each year we remember the 'great wars' for wont of better wars, and what we feel are the ghostly battles without the fear, smells, noise of the harsh reality - and as the years have flown we wonder why? Thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/18/2018 1:02:00 AM
Hi Lindsay yes we do stop to ponder why some wars and battles really started. So many thousands/millions are killed, soldiers as well as civilians. What I can't comprehend is when family members are in fact on opposite sides, that really saddens me. thank you for your comment Lindsay, Best wishes, Jennifer
Date: 11/17/2018 1:53:00 PM
Women are best at "No Hold Barred" conflicts, and are clearly best at pursuing peace, as evidenced by your Rhyme Royale! Aloha! Rico
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/18/2018 12:56:00 AM
Hi Rico, Not always - do you follow the TV series Homeland with the female American President who is about to plunge America into chaos , it depends. Thank you for your lovely comment. Keep well, Yasou, Jennifer
Date: 11/17/2018 7:09:00 AM
The cadence of this made me so happy, as it was lively, and fun in spite of the seriousness of it. I found myself chanting this. Finally looking to see what kind of poem it is. Rhyme Royale. I think I have tried it, but it was difficult. You have made it seem approachable, Jennifer. Well done!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/17/2018 7:36:00 AM
I Caren, Thank you, that is a very sweet comment. I love my rhyme, and then an occasion couplet or limerick, but mostly rhyme. Keep up what you write , they are always great Caren, and love your short stories. xoxo, Jennifer.
Date: 11/17/2018 5:36:00 AM
There are better ways at solving disagreement's than war, well written Jennifer. Tom.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/17/2018 6:18:00 AM
Hi Tom, Very true, but when tempers flare and testosterone soars men sometimes do come to blows! Best wishes, Jennifer.

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