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Premiere Contest WinnerGhost-Fears Vanquished By Holy Ghost

Admitting painful cause of childhood fright I would cringe hearing … “Ghosts appear tonight especially to the cowardly nervous…” Such tortured me with panic so grievous. Yet, in pretense, my heart struggled to cope while loathing ghost stories that vanquished hope robbing me once of bliss I yearned to claim… Such propped me to face weakness against shame. Nurtured by parents midst loving embrace in home showered with mercy, truth and grace I was shielded from attacks of ghost-blow… Such drove me to soar toward courage-glow. Learning that ghost-shivers result to pain I sought help from the Lord Who gives peace-gain since with His salvation comes victory… Such granted me triumph from misery. Grateful for imparted divine nature wrought by Christ toward steadfast faith’s venture I praise Him for eternal life’s blest zeal… Such made me His own with Holy Ghost*’s seal. Propelled now to serve through the Holy Ghost I do reach-out with my best and utmost geared by the Almighty’s compassion-hand… Such moves me to share kindness, heaven-brand.
Titus 3:5 Not by works of righteousness which we have done, but according to his mercy he saved us, by the washing of regeneration, and renewing of the Holy Ghost. October 15, 2021 1st place, "Ghost Lace" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 10/17/2021.
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Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Beautifully written of your strong feelings Congratulations on your First Place Win!
Logan Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:54 AM
We’ll done and congratulations, Beata.
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October 18, 2021 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win Beata! A beautiful testament to your journey with the Holy Ghost! Truly, there is no other ghost that can overpower our Holy Ghost under whose amazing wings we find peace. Well said. I love that your poem gave honor to the Holy Spirit who is often forgotten! Sending you blessings!
La France Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Beata, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in Chantelle's contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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October 17, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I like the way you went from "Ghosts" to the "Holy Ghost." Thanks for adding the bible verse. Have a blessed autumn day.....................
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October 17, 2021 at 9:59 AM
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Jones Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 12:33 AM
Your passion for the lord is obvious in this poetic write. Love it and for sure it is a winner!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 1:59 PM
I love this sweet friend. I love it so. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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