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Ghost of Black Forest

Deep in Black Forest
lives a good-natured ghost
whose eyes are like Nebula
a blurry blue

He Slithers along
steeply falling terrain
where ravine-like dark valley
drops deadly low

Every Lunar night
near Cascading waters
He camps to sing by the grave
of his lost girl

Serpentine river
dragging along cold air
gushes forth Myriad rifts
roars with the ghost

All through the white night
he wails, whispers with Lilt
at dawn he disappears with
Phosphorous smile

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Sara Kendrick Date: 6/14/2025 6:31:00 AM Creative lines penned in this winner. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 6/14/2025 10:29:00 PM Thank you for your kind visit with sweet words dear poet. Thank you very much.

Krishnanand Guptar Date: 6/12/2025 11:25:00 AM Congratulations friend on your win in this contest with a crisp poem using the hinted words with ease. Wishing you a cheerful day. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 6/13/2025 5:15:00 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. I am grateful to you for your precious words and good wishes. thank you, means a lot to me. Good day sir.

Howard Kerr Date: 6/12/2025 10:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win, thriveni. Images and interline smoothness, poetic flow and atmospheric peaks central to this amazing piece. Howard Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 6/13/2025 5:13:00 AM Your kind visit means so much to me, thank you very much dear poet for your precious time and words. I am glad you liked this write. Thank you, you made my day, I am grateful to you for today's joy. Thank you.

Karen Jones Date: 6/12/2025 9:47:00 AM Congratulations on your imaginative poems win! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 6/13/2025 5:11:00 AM imaginative indeed, never seen a ghost! ahah, you make me smile dear friend, thank you so much for your kind visit. Hope you are doing well. Be blessed dear poet. thank you.

Sam Kauffman Date: 6/11/2025 9:30:00 AM Thriveni, delightful and such a creative way to use the required words. Love that you turned them into a ghost story albeit a sad ghost story! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings my friend. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 6/12/2025 3:33:00 AM It is a pleasure to know your thoughts on this write, Thank you so much dear friend for your kind visit. I am grateful to you for good wishes and blessings. thank you.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/6/2025 11:53:00 AM I enjoyed reading your "Ghost of Black Forest" write. I found the words hard to use but you made it look easy. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away....... Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 6/8/2025 7:01:00 AM Thank you so much dear cheerful poet for your kind visit and loving words. Yes difficult words, phosphorous and lunar. I have tried my best to weave dear friend, thank you for the good wishes and blessings. You too.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/5/2025 1:18:00 AM You used chosen words brilliantly. Love ghost stories. Best for a win. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 6/5/2025 6:32:00 AM I kept looking at the given words, and all I could think of is this to scoop up the words. I am grateful to you for the encouraging words dear friend. Thank you for the best wishes, thank you for your precious time.