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Ghost of Black Forest

Deep in Black Forest lives a good-natured ghost whose eyes are like Nebula a blurry blue He Slithers along steeply falling terrain where ravine-like dark valley drops deadly low Every Lunar night near Cascading waters He camps to sing by the grave of his lost girl Serpentine river dragging along cold air gushes forth Myriad rifts roars with the ghost All through the white night he wails, whispers with Lilt at dawn he disappears with Phosphorous smile

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/14/2025 6:31:00 AM

Creative lines penned in this winner. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/14/2025 10:29:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit with sweet words dear poet. Thank you very much.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/12/2025 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations friend on your win in this contest with a crisp poem using the hinted words with ease. Wishing you a cheerful day.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/13/2025 5:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. I am grateful to you for your precious words and good wishes. thank you, means a lot to me. Good day sir.

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/12/2025 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, thriveni. Images and interline smoothness, poetic flow and atmospheric peaks central to this amazing piece. Howard

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/13/2025 5:13:00 AM

Your kind visit means so much to me, thank you very much dear poet for your precious time and words. I am glad you liked this write. Thank you, you made my day, I am grateful to you for today's joy. Thank you.

Karen Jones

Date: 6/12/2025 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your imaginative poems win!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/13/2025 5:11:00 AM

imaginative indeed, never seen a ghost! ahah, you make me smile dear friend, thank you so much for your kind visit. Hope you are doing well. Be blessed dear poet. thank you.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/11/2025 9:30:00 AM

Thriveni, delightful and such a creative way to use the required words. Love that you turned them into a ghost story albeit a sad ghost story! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings my friend.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/12/2025 3:33:00 AM

It is a pleasure to know your thoughts on this write, Thank you so much dear friend for your kind visit. I am grateful to you for good wishes and blessings. thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2025 11:53:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Ghost of Black Forest" write. I found the words hard to use but you made it look easy. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.......

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/8/2025 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much dear cheerful poet for your kind visit and loving words. Yes difficult words, phosphorous and lunar. I have tried my best to weave dear friend, thank you for the good wishes and blessings. You too.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/5/2025 1:18:00 AM

You used chosen words brilliantly. Love ghost stories. Best for a win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/5/2025 6:32:00 AM

I kept looking at the given words, and all I could think of is this to scoop up the words. I am grateful to you for the encouraging words dear friend. Thank you for the best wishes, thank you for your precious time.