Ghost

two eyes watch me from that banyan tree,
evening on my stroll back through woods,
I feel them pierce the back of my neck,
but I dare not raise my head and look,
they tell me they belong to a tradesman,
who lost his life in a violent robbery,
I feel he is waiting for someone,
does he seek a friend to ferry him home,
or just waiting for time to set him free?,
would he harm me if I got near,
and like a mist would he suddenly appear,
would he slowly fade away with time,
join the rest from the house of the dead?
last time I walked past those woods,
saw migrant cranes had set  nests,
may be he will travel when they fly,
so I may walk the woods and not be spied.

Ghost contest
Julia Ward
free verse (any rhyme not intended)
17 lines
written 15/02/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Wow, Krish. This is really really good!!
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 2:21 PM
thanks Andrea! thanks for the supportive words!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Good! It has become better than before.Check out comment section of my ghost poem
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Thanks Rama!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Contest rules 20 lines max should have line from the world of dead or something like that. Check contest guidelines again. You heard the latest joke going around- Ashwins wife is telling him curd rice ready, finish match soon and come
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Thanks Rama! changed to 17 lines! I hope Curd rice helps Curl the ball! Good luck for tomorrow.
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