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Ghost

two eyes watch me from that banyan tree, evening on my stroll back through woods, I feel them pierce the back of my neck, but I dare not raise my head and look, they tell me they belong to a tradesman, who lost his life in a violent robbery, I feel he is waiting for someone, does he seek a friend to ferry him home, or just waiting for time to set him free?, would he harm me if I got near, and like a mist would he suddenly appear, would he slowly fade away with time, join the rest from the house of the dead? last time I walked past those woods, saw migrant cranes had set nests, may be he will travel when they fly, so I may walk the woods and not be spied. Ghost contest Julia Ward free verse (any rhyme not intended) 17 lines written 15/02/2021

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Date: 2/16/2021 1:57:00 PM
Wow, Krish. This is really really good!!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/16/2021 2:21:00 PM
thanks Andrea! thanks for the supportive words!
Date: 2/15/2021 11:07:00 AM
Good! It has become better than before.Check out comment section of my ghost poem
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/15/2021 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Rama!
Date: 2/15/2021 10:05:00 AM
Contest rules 20 lines max should have line from the world of dead or something like that. Check contest guidelines again. You heard the latest joke going around- Ashwins wife is telling him curd rice ready, finish match soon and come
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/15/2021 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Rama! changed to 17 lines! I hope Curd rice helps Curl the ball! Good luck for tomorrow.

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