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Luloo was in a terrible rush Shovelled snow then fell on her tush It isn't a joke - Her ankle got broke But the snow's now turned into slush GET WELL SOON LULOO 26th February 2016

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Date: 2/27/2016 3:53:00 PM
Get well soon!! :D :D This is so sweet, dear Jan!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2016 5:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2016 2:54:00 AM
Soothing
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Syam:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 9:47:00 PM
That poem would sure cheer up anyone needing to get well soon! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Arthur it only took a few mins to pen and I know it made LuLoo laugh:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 8:33:00 PM
Leave it to a poet to turn pain into a humorous poem. I can picture Laura on her couch laughing. This is great medicine and I know she will heal beautifully, perfectly ... CayCay (Jan - you are so sweet) (Laura - be patient with yourself)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/27/2016 10:58:00 AM
Yes CayCay, I laughed my "tush" off! Thanks for the uplift :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2016 8:25:00 AM
I couldn't resist writing this and sending it to LuLoo and she was kind enough to allow me to post it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 7:57:00 PM
Great write. but too bad for our dear Laura Loo. I enjoyed this. I better go pay her another quick visit!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Andrea -luloo
Date: 2/26/2016 6:37:00 PM
Great write! Poor Laura. I guess I'm faving her tush. I posted a new piece. If I feel up to it I have another 260 to post. Over 100 each motivated by a different image that I will include.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2016 8:26:00 AM
Oh will drop by ... so lovely to see you my friend:I hope you are feeling better now:-) Love and hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 4:04:00 PM
I'm so sorry for Laura...hope she will get well soon; but it's thanks to her misfortune that this lovely limerick was born! Have a nice weekend, Jan:) hugs // paul
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Paul...-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Paul I was delighted that Laura allowed me to post it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 10:09:00 AM
Oh......I'm sorry, Luloo. Hope recovery is quick. Good cheer up card, Jan. Hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Eileen you are sweet :)- luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Eileen I am so glad LuLoo let me post this:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 9:43:00 AM
Awe!!!! Great Limerick. Get well laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve I am glad I was able to make her smile:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 8:58:00 AM
Jan, you're so toadly hilarious. This limerick is so much better than a get well card! haha
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/26/2016 9:42:00 AM
The bright side is that you didn't break your wrist ~ you can still wield a pen! I tease you, but I know it must be painful.. don't push the healing process.
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Date: 2/26/2016 9:37:00 AM
Lin, it's funny because I emailed her, then like 5 minutes later, she sends me this limerick! So talented :) It took me longer to go to the bathroom, than it did for her to write this!! And the whole limerick is true right down to the snow turning into slush as it melted! -luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 9:23:00 AM
Aww thanks Lin - I wrote this last night when LuLoo let me know her news and she was kind enough to let me share it on soup:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 8:43:00 AM
- Be well soon .....I see you smile Laura, spring will soon come to you ... hugs :) - Well done, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! Very sweet of you, have a great day :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 8:22:00 AM
AHAHA!! Lovely lady, you crack me up everyday! This really brightened my day about 2000% ! You are so very sweet and I am grateful for you. The best part is, is that YES, I was in a rush, and YES I did fall on my tush, and YES the snow turned into messy slush in the afternoon! So accurate lady Jan! Thank you very much...:*thanks* *smiles * *you're the best* -LULOO
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 9:34:00 AM
Jan, YES it did brighten my day! It's people like you that make a difference in peoples lives :) -luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 9:33:00 AM
Lin, thank you sweet lady! Yes, I am couch bound now so hopefully the pain won't push my inspiration away!! :) Thanks
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/26/2016 8:57:00 AM
Oh Laura... I'm so sorry that your ankle is broken. I swear, there is no limit to what some people will do to be able to sit and do nothing but write. Your Muse must be smiling. Hugs, and heal soon.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 8:25:00 AM
Aww LuLoo thanks for letting me post this - I wrote it to cheer you up and I'm so pleased it brightened your day:-) Get well soon!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2016 7:59:00 AM
Nice limerick.Jan. so this is real?....get well soon Luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 8:35:00 AM
She's being waited on hand and 'foot':-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Tim. You are very sweet :) I'm doing ok :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 8:02:00 AM
Yes unfortunately it is true ... Luloo let me know yesterday she slipped whilst shovelling snow and has broken her ankle - I wrote this last night and sent it to her and have her permission to post the poem:-) hugs Jan xx