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Gertrude Abercrombie, Woman with Tethered Horse and Moon

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nothing really holds us in place and I'm not sure where we go to when we rear up then some semblance of order restores, everything settles the constants continue energy just overspilt in the moment we don't know where we are the light of the moon is not enough more afraid of the words "it's all ok" then letting chaos play out for if you calm my senses I look around see everything is twisted note no memory of arriving no path to leave no landscape to be part of I see your eyes and your efforts to still me maybe that's enough tonight for now, it's ok

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Date: 4/25/2024 5:04:00 PM
Wow ! You are so good at this. Its wonderful D You create movement in a still painting and a continuance of the story portrayed. Excellent Ekphrasis my friend.
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Date: 4/25/2024 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Wen, this has 4 faves but didn't have any comments - I can't get my head round it?! Plus the views went immediately sky high. It's left me scratching my head this one as it's one of many I've done on this artist. Maybe I'll do a tethered horse set of three and see if that's it :) glad you like it, nice to see you stopping by x

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