Georgia Peach Dusk

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Georgia peach dusk beyond blue and cloudy skies a bodacious kiss won with a Southern accent a drawl that draws one's eyes up

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Joe Dimino

Date: 7/26/2025 10:11:00 PM

Indeed, love the southern accent. Singular and charming. So is your poem. Blessings.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/26/2025 9:28:00 PM

If I ever go to Georgia, I'll remember your poem It appears that Georgia is awesome

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2025 11:27:00 AM

Very cool analogy of sunset with southern accent. This is how to write tanka. Fave

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2025 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2025 8:35:00 AM

I read somewhere that Georgia is a lovely place. Malta has become terrible now.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2025 6:23:00 PM

So sorry, Victor :(

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/26/2025 7:34:00 AM

i crossed Georgia once, and got good vibrations, exquisite poetry, thanks poet

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2025 6:23:00 PM

Thank you, Yann!

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/25/2025 10:58:00 PM

Sweet, sultry, and irresistibly Southern! It captures a moment rich with charm and atmosphere—romance wrapped in twilight and a drawl that lingers like honey. Beautifully done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2025 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Rowena! Likewise your commentary emphasis is beautiful!