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Georgia Peach Dusk

Georgia peach dusk
beyond blue and cloudy skies
a bodacious kiss
won with a Southern accent
a drawl that draws one's eyes up

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Paige Hind

July 29, 2025 at 8:45 PM

Very pretty, love your imagery!!

Kim Rodrigues

July 30, 2025 at 8:47 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Valsa George

July 28, 2025 at 8:17 PM

Georgia sounds heavenly. Do the Georgian's have a clearly distinguishing drawl in their speech? Some say I have a drawl in my accent. :) All the best dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2025 at 9:28 PM

Some do! There are many who have moved here from other places :)

Gershon Wolf

July 28, 2025 at 3:57 PM

Awwww, that drawwwl. ~ I'ze Up

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2025 at 5:15 PM

LOL! :)

Sara Kendrick

July 28, 2025 at 1:48 PM

The southern drawl can work wonders. LOL..Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2025 at 5:15 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Joseph P. DiMino

July 26, 2025 at 10:11 PM

Indeed, love the southern accent. Singular and charming. So is your poem. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues

July 27, 2025 at 4:50 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Hilda Greenhough

July 26, 2025 at 9:28 PM

If I ever go to Georgia, I'll remember your poem It appears that Georgia is awesome

Kim Rodrigues

July 27, 2025 at 4:50 AM

Thank you, Hilda! Hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2025 at 11:27 AM

Very cool analogy of sunset with southern accent. This is how to write tanka. Fave

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2025 at 6:22 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Victor Buhagiar

July 26, 2025 at 8:35 AM

I read somewhere that Georgia is a lovely place. Malta has become terrible now.

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2025 at 6:23 PM

So sorry, Victor :(

Yann Rolland

July 26, 2025 at 7:34 AM

i crossed Georgia once, and got good vibrations, exquisite poetry, thanks poet

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2025 at 6:23 PM

Thank you, Yann!

Rowena Velasco

July 25, 2025 at 10:58 PM

Sweet, sultry, and irresistibly Southern! It captures a moment rich with charm and atmosphere—romance wrapped in twilight and a drawl that lingers like honey. Beautifully done!

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2025 at 6:17 AM

Thank you, Rowena! Likewise your commentary emphasis is beautiful!