Gentlest of Fresh Leaves

This is my one love and when it will die
I might as well drift by the alley’s wayside
Or care for young leaves which are my pride,
That only bluebirds from frosty air cry .

Soon, I’ll hear old winter’s song through dusk’s lyre
Climbing on stars, my breaths moaning aloud;
To watch day’s procession through a head bowed
When twilight dims a moon, frail like kohl’s pyre

Yet in this secular autumn I know
I have felt his pure warmth open life's heart;
This  kindled fervor, only to depart…
Yet evenings bloom on a sepulcher, aglow

Mellow like fresh leaves when times past enthrall,
Gentlest of all, my love, gentlest of all.



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For Gren’s Evergreens (Golden Oldies) 
# 2  Contest    ----------4/30/2016
Inspiration from the song, Autumn Leaves
Petrarchan Sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on your Golden Oldies playing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those oldies impressive..Sara
Day Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Excellent work on your poem and win in the Golden Oldie #2 contest. Congrats! - Jesse
Smith Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Beautifully created Nette, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Lovely! Congrats on your number one win!
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Congrats on your rhythmical win..Sara
Raven Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Hi Nette, the art is in, as Victor says, capturing the image. You do this so well with your poetry, you are able to capture the essence of moments with your gentle words. You take us into the heart of your scene, your words painting a canvas of such peaceful scenes. A beautiful Sonnet Nette, written so gently with Love and care. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
Devnath  Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Vaso Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 10:38 PM
I came to read this again, these verse's resonate so well with my thoughts at the moment!
Marty Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Captivating poem! I got carried by a stream, of melodious language and the beauty of love's meaning , its passing, touched me!
Scars Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Oh Nette, I just love this sonnet. You really have a true gift dear lady..good luck it will place very high I just know it! be blessed, :)-luloo
Trifiatis Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 5:43 AM
A captivating sonnet! Who can expect anything less from you dear, nette? A seven!
Dalei Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Nice sonnet with amazing ending. A7 from me.............hugs
Flower Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:38 AM
Seems like I can feel all those sweet echoing words...quite lovely, nette. Good luck for the contest. hugs. ;)
Vaso Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 1:57 AM
Loved this, I find it amazing such different styles of poetry sometimes intersect! :)
Heemstra Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Beautiful sonnet!
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