Genesis

Genesis

Those early days in paradise for both of them were bliss
they strolled God's earthly garden, briefly stopping for a kiss.
No house for them to live in, so no need for DIY
no cooking for young Eve, on fruit and veg they both got by.
Then Satan came in scary form (a snake, no, not a spider)
and talked Eve into home brewing, her first attempt at Cider.
By climbing God's forbidden tree from God's law did she drift
and when he found out, boy oh boy was our Creator miffed.
He took away their Godliness, leaving them with no kit
and off they ran to find some cover for their naughty bits.
The pair would not have disobeyed if they knew what now lurked
for Eve got all the ironing, while Adam went to work.


* DIY in England is 'Do it yourself', i.e decorating, gardening, maintenance etc.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Laurie Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Crikey Viv, I misread the title. I thought it was GENIUS and that's exactly what I think you are with your great light-hearted verse - Lindsay
Wigley Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Thanks, Lindsay, I appreciate it coming from a maestro on the smileometer such as yourself. Regards, Viv
Y. Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:26 AM
Hi Viv, I really liked your humorous take on Genesis. I was very entertaining. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Wigley Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 1:08 AM
Bless you, my child. There, you've made me go all religious... Viv
Godwin Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 10:45 PM
I don't know what DIY is, maybe because I'm an American? I'm guessing. BUT I do know clever and entertaining, and this was both. Missed this wit of yours and now that I've had time to notice 'things', I see I was only one day late noticing your return. I enjoyed your poem, I'm moving towards the others you posted ... CayCay
Wigley Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Sorry, CayCay, I should have pointed out that 'DIY' is 'do it yourself' in England, anything from decorating to house maintenance, etc. Thanks for popping by, Viv x
Inman Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Back with a witty vengeance!!
Wigley Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Ta-daaaaa!
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