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Gelid Winter Winds-Ws

Gelid winter winds are creating drifts of snow The perfect time for sledding Trying to keep warm I bundled up in woolens And... played for hours in the cold January 13, 2023 Winter Sedoka Contest Sponsored by Charlie Messina

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:28:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2023 1:28:00 PM

this is sure cute. Congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/25/2023 9:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Now we are cold so inside for hot chocolate. Have a great day..............

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 4:58:00 AM

Lovely write, Lin. Reminds me of my younger years :) Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Hugs Charlie

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/13/2023 6:32:00 AM

Lin, your seasonal Sedoka though chilly in imagery brought warmth to my heart!! I really enjoyed! Happy Friday xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2023 6:52:00 AM

Thank you very much, Mike. I'm so pleased you could envision the snowy day.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/13/2023 6:20:00 AM

Took me back when I used to take my daughters to the park sledding, after a couple of hours when our hands had turned blue it was time to go home. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2023 6:51:00 AM

I've never had the opportunity to go sledding until I was too old and at risk of breaking bones. ha Thanks, Tom.