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Gave Up Poetry

Was an atheist, once upon a time Poem for God wished to write that could rime But as he did not believe Not a line could he achieve Thus gave up poetry and took up crime! © Demetrios Trifiatis 19 April 2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/20/2016 1:45:00 PM

Very witty, Demi, but I can sense more to it between the lines! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/20/2016 2:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul, for taking the time to visit! I do appreciate it, my friend!

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/19/2016 3:52:00 PM

This cracked me the hell up. (See what I did there?) Great to read you again!!! :D

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/20/2016 2:54:00 PM

Drake, are you alright my friend? We haven't see you for ages! What should I see? I am certain whatever it is, it is good! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2016 12:58:00 PM

- Thanks dear Demetrios, I needed a smile :) - Well done ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2016 1:32:00 PM

If I made you smile after all this it means it is really good! Haha! Thank you dearest Anne-Lise for your precious visit!

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/19/2016 12:24:00 PM

What is that? That is that. Beautifully expressed my lovely friend. +7+. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2016 1:30:00 PM

Thank you BL for your dear visit and comment!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2016 7:44:00 AM

A fun yet serious message.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2016 8:58:00 AM

Richard, how wonderful to receive your visit! Thank you my friend!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 4/19/2016 3:35:00 AM

You go my friend! TRUTH:), jill

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2016 7:22:00 AM

What a lovely visit! Thank you dear Jill!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2016 3:24:00 AM

LOL great one Demtrios:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2016 7:25:00 AM

Happy you liked it dear Jan! So wonderful to see you! Thank you!