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Gathering Dust

Gathering dust The day you left me for a heavenly abode, Yearnings since then are gathering dust, Simmering heart had dared loudly explode, Family and friends are also posing unjust, Yet you were the only who betrayed my trust !! Written March 3rd, 2015 For contest "Gathering dust " by John Lawless

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/3/2015 6:26:00 PM

Dear Upma it's hard to make piece with someone who has past, the feeling stay within us for a long time after there gone, but we all have a striength within us that's amazing in the end a healing instinct, you'll find this as time goes by, but your expressing your feelings and that's one of the most important step in the healing, great write sad but that's ok, cheri thank you for your comment I hope they will like it, cheri

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2015 4:35:00 PM

Dear Upma, I can definitely relate to the feelings you express here. Sometimes we can't come to terms with the pain a person has inflicted, even after they enter the "heavenly abode." The pain lingers. Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/3/2015 4:36:00 PM

By the way, I see it's your birthday and hope it's a happy one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2015 2:07:00 PM

Sadness and also some anger at the end. A heartfelt poem

Constance La France

Date: 3/3/2015 1:05:00 PM

Upma, the feeling that I get from your poem is anger the someone you loved died, and I know this feeling well and thanks for visiting my poem Oh Sweet Spring and leaving that lovely comment . . .