Garters and Lace

Red garters and black stockings With a black lace camisole Complete seductive attire ....anticipation

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James Fraser

Date: 1/9/2011 9:06:00 AM

Oo la la Francine, image filled awaiting the moment captured....:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/5/2011 6:59:00 PM

This is so spicy, it makes chili taste like ice cream. A fine example of a dodoitsu.

John Freeman

Date: 1/4/2011 8:09:00 AM

Meaningful Dodoitsu, Francine! Sorry, didn't mean to make you a year older. Smile. I got a notice on FB for a birthday, was someone else. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/1/2011 11:51:00 AM

Great little dodoitsu. The form sounds like an illicit rendezvous doesn't it? Good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2011 11:46:00 AM

Good one...Reads like winning material in more ways than one..Good luck..Your presence at my blog was just a bost for my sagging spirit this afternoon..Sara

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/1/2011 11:37:00 AM

Hi . Thanks for typo help. Much appreciated . This is xxx. Will have to hide it from kids. Best of luck in contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/31/2010 6:28:00 PM

captivating,francine.. love the last line!! best winning wishes in the contest.. hugggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/31/2010 5:42:00 PM

Nice write on the seductive attire, Good luck in the contest, Francine

William Kershaw

Date: 12/31/2010 5:06:00 PM

Francine, Phewwww, its getting hot in here. What an outfit for the new years eve party. HaHa. But then I guess it all depends on who's invited to the party. An excellent write as we always expect from your golden pen. Hope you have a safe and happy New Year. Love, Will

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/31/2010 4:57:00 PM

Francine - Wonderfully done - just enough to entice - Happy New Year, mj