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Garden Vs Love

Akin to the beautiful flowers in the garden, You're no less to compare as the flower itself. Like the jasmine I mean, which beauty portrays, To the extent of creating a glamourous entrance. In the luxurious park, the flowers and bees love, To that such traits, each other merely helps, With the kisses, they begin, and beauty adds. So, you're the flower dear, and our is yet to start.

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Date: 9/24/2021 10:52:00 AM
It is a continuous Ziket as: 1. A Ziket consists of two poetic lines. 2. The first line has 1 to 8 syllables and the second line has 1 to 5 syllables or vice versa. as Dr. Maya Angelou did in her poem “Tears”. Structural Analysis: GARDEN VS LOVE Akin to the beautiful flowers in the garden The poet has written 4 Zikets in 8 lines to express the same theme. So the poet can be said a Zikorean poet from Bhuton. Dr. Zik The inventor of Zikorean poetry, prose and Ziket and Zinet. Jhelum Pakistan
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