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Garden Ship

The Winter is enamel; buckets of cold, sodden pots of late growth. Snow ship. Trees taut with tackle of frost. Earth hard as the white sea, adrift and lost between seasons made of ice and sorts of rain, not falling, not sailing. Dull and still as December.

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Date: 2/1/2015 12:11:00 PM
Such beautiful vivid description throughout the poem - winter is enamel -such a wonderful metaphor - I agree cold and hard but also shining with snow and frost:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xxx
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