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Garden of Love

(Mostly anapestic tetrameter) I was lost as the night wrapped its ebony shades round your lips like the petals on roses unfurled; in the dark, the soft crimson of welcoming smile left me hopeless to shun a temptation like this. In the air like the scent of a fresh blooming rose, drifts the musk - like a bee to the pollen I'm drawn, so in willing surrender, I happily fell, though aware of the thorns and the danger they posed. What sweet peril, they bade me, I could not resist, so I reached for your love and I bled and I cried as I danced through the stems of your past and your life and was freed from my own hidden garden of pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/6/2018 10:15:00 AM
Very interesting and I learned something new. I had no idea that the famous Night Before Christmas was written to a set Meter, Would be interesting to try this form.....I love the extended. Metaphor you have used as well. Best in the New Year, SuZ
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Date: 12/10/2017 10:38:00 PM
Gorgeous :)
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:44:00 PM
kindred spirits seeking comfort from the emotional ravages of life that have left both injured, yet a freedom is found
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Craig Cornish
Date: 12/11/2017 2:20:00 PM
Thx Frederic, ---BTW, perhaps during this winter we can get together for a whatever--I'm in Spring Hill now---take care Bud
Date: 12/8/2017 6:28:00 PM
This is awesome, Craig! Love the line "what sweet peril.." Very nice!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 12/11/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thx Rhoda, very kind!

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