Garden of Eden
Into the Garden of Eden
he fell
And slipped away
from this life.
New visions
had been
created,
weighted
down,
the task
of an army,
non-too calmly
blowing
fresh winds,
fresh thoughts
through
his veins.
Taking away
the pains
and brought
hope,
adventure,
ambitions,
new additions
they brought
a new history,
a mystery
to those around.
But.
Everything
important
was
then
taken,
forsaken
and his life
was over
slipping
away
into monotony,
a labotomy
filled
with inertia
filled
with the past.
He dreams,
he lives
all in his mind,
free of the binds
where no-one
can intrude,
create an interlude
to this life
of eternal bliss
the past pi****
away
and slowly
his feet dipped,
slipped
into the
Garden of Eden.
Copyright © Gareth Heslop | Year Posted 2009
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