Garden

The garden haunts me with tales of terror
whispers the last sighs of wilting flowers
chills me with its predatory silence
torments me with its unheard shrieks

beauty edged with talons, thorns and stingers
innocence complicit in its evil
as hunter’s dance the hunted’s last duet
beneath the blood-stained moon of nature’s nest.

And yet, soft sun will rise as will the trill
of shadows slowly fleeing ‘neath their roots
for the moment now is all that matters
as daylight’s demons masquerade as couth

The garden is the stage and not the play
Its curtain call an avant-garde display.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Narain Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Nice to read a sad sight of your garden. It will become nice soon.
Volumes Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 9:11 AM
A unique insight into a typical garden. Most poems about gardens describe perfume, color and beauty. Nothing nicer than to read a fresh new idea, different to anything else. Your poem is an eye opener John. I enjoyed it immensely. Congrats on your first place win.
May Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 11:39 PM
Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 5:06 PM
what wonder personification in your superb sonnet, one which the bored of avon would appreciate (i don't like the bard/Shakespeare but love your sonnet! hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Whoa! Positively Shakespearean tragedian, me thinkian....
Flood Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 4:54 PM
A wondrous write, John; personification in a sonnet… works for me. Best of luck in the contest. Terry
Willason Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 10:45 PM
John....a masterly write, one full of gems. Your skill and depth on full display. Absorbed with pleasure. Paul
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