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Garden

The garden haunts me with tales of terror whispers the last sighs of wilting flowers chills me with its predatory silence torments me with its unheard shrieks beauty edged with talons, thorns and stingers innocence complicit in its evil as hunter’s dance the hunted’s last duet beneath the blood-stained moon of nature’s nest. And yet, soft sun will rise as will the trill of shadows slowly fleeing ‘neath their roots for the moment now is all that matters as daylight’s demons masquerade as couth The garden is the stage and not the play Its curtain call an avant-garde display.

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Date: 9/2/2023 10:12:00 AM
Nice to read a sad sight of your garden. It will become nice soon.
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Date: 9/2/2023 9:11:00 AM
A unique insight into a typical garden. Most poems about gardens describe perfume, color and beauty. Nothing nicer than to read a fresh new idea, different to anything else. Your poem is an eye opener John. I enjoyed it immensely. Congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:39:00 PM
Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/24/2023 5:06:00 PM
what wonder personification in your superb sonnet, one which the bored of avon would appreciate (i don't like the bard/Shakespeare but love your sonnet! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/22/2023 7:20:00 PM
Whoa! Positively Shakespearean tragedian, me thinkian....
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Date: 8/22/2023 4:54:00 PM
A wondrous write, John; personification in a sonnet… works for me. Best of luck in the contest. Terry
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Date: 8/21/2023 10:45:00 PM
John....a masterly write, one full of gems. Your skill and depth on full display. Absorbed with pleasure. Paul
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