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Our packaging simply is wrong To hold things in place, safe and strong The plastic hugs tight The cardboard you fight To open the product takes long! And when you are done you will see The thing you had purchased, might be As small as your thumb While you face huge sum Of valueless outer debris! Though this is just one type of waste We could conquer this one with haste Sell all products bare No double-wrapped care See tons of sales garbage erased! June 15, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/14/2017 8:10:00 AM
Hats off!! you have done it beautifully. I really appreciate your concern . I wish all of us could relate with the thought. Try my poem- 'Let's Try Ditching'. Congratulations. Hugs and smiles # Archana :D
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Date: 5/20/2017 1:49:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/20/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/22/2015 4:56:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:57:00 PM
congrats
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:31:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/21/2015 11:05:00 PM
A great choice of style for the comp, Sandra. Love it. Well done on your win. Viv x
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Date: 6/16/2015 7:54:00 AM
love the humour here Sandra but also a very clever message too in the final poem- good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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