Garage Sale

1221 Boiling Weather Drive First customer gets a free beehive With purchase ten bones or more Food, drinks, desserts galore Porcelain hitchhiker needs a ride

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2012 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem!! Happy for you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/24/2012 6:43:00 PM

Aww..thank you!

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/24/2012 7:46:00 AM

Wow! I like the sound of 1221! Clever use of this limerick form for the contest. Just right to the point in a few lines! Congratulations on your win, Sharon! Love, Hanitra

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/24/2012 6:43:00 PM

Thank you! I like beehives:)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/24/2012 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sharon xx

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/24/2012 6:43:00 PM

Thank you ma'am

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2012 11:12:00 PM

CONGRATS SHARON ON A SUPER WRITE AND TOP TEN WIN LUV ..

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/24/2012 2:05:00 AM

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 6:39:00 PM

SHARON.. Congratulations with your awesome poem, in my sisters "A Poets Garage Sale" contest.. :-)had fun reading every poem.... always~ PD

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/23/2012 8:35:00 PM

Is she really your sister? Or is that a figure of speech? Either way, I enjoyed it very much. It was a cool challenge!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2012 4:49:00 PM

Great idea to go with for the contest..Congrats on your win..Sara

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/23/2012 8:36:00 PM

Thank you:) Creative is always fun!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 4:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your poems win in ~SKAT's~ "Garage Sale" contest Sharon. Love, Carol

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/24/2012 6:43:00 PM

Thanks Carol for reading my stuff!

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2012 2:46:00 PM

Big congratulations on your win, Sharon! hugs:) Leonora

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/23/2012 3:13:00 PM

Thank you!

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2012 2:21:00 PM

S, thanks 4 the support and win* Siddy

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/23/2012 3:13:00 PM

Thanks SKAT! It was fun to write:)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/4/2012 12:34:00 PM

Cute poem abpout the garage sale. Well done.

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/6/2012 7:32:00 AM

Gracias:))

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/3/2012 2:28:00 PM

Eclectic little tidbit that you have up for sale. If I had more hair I'd probably care to recieve a free beehive. But hitchhiking's no good today if you want to stay alive.

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 4:10:00 PM

I think if your porcelain it's ok..hehe:))