Connie Marcum Wong Poet Free verse

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Galactic Gathering

Galactic Gathering

Cosmic colored creations divinely dance,
With silent notes whimsically whirling 
In surreal songs of universal luminescence.
Glowing gems in free flight rhythm,
Spirally synced collective consciousness
Emitting vibrancy in lengths of light through
Cosmic cluster’s blissful birth which
Emanates life force energy to sage souls
In the quiet hours of distal dreams that
Reigns, resonating with heaven’s harmony.


2-23-22 

Vibrant blissful stillness Poetry premiere Contest~N/A~
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Vladislav Raven July 26, 2022 at 2:19 PM Hi Connie, this is a galactic wonder. It is so strongly written with such peaceful visions within the lines. A cosmic dance that does sing in the mind. I always love to look at the sky, I can lose myself in its peace for hours. It is where I find my poetry. Excellent write Connie. Has to be a fave. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Eric Cohen June 8, 2022 at 7:22 PM Beautiful poem and subject, Connie. It especially resonates with me because my aspiration is to take my own photo of that galaxy (the Andromeda Galaxy). One day it will collide and merge with our Milky Way. Best to you. ~Eric Connie Marcum Wong July 26, 2022 at 2:36 PM I am very pleased that you enjoyed my poem Eric. I was very busy at the time you left this comment so I missed responding. My grandson and his mom were visiting from California. Most nights here the night sky mesmerizes. Thank you very much. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2022 at 4:54 PM Did this one ever win? It's been a while and I never checked to see. Did you know Geoffrey here at Soup, Connie. I just did a blog for him. I was informed by a friend that he died today. He was someone who felt like we do about what's happening in the world. He is out of the mess and in a much better place. Connie Marcum Wong May 22, 2022 at 4:22 PM No, he gave it an N/A. I am sorry to hear the sad news but you are right that he is in a better place. Thanks Connie

Lindsay Laurie March 27, 2022 at 5:50 PM Hello Connie ... full of colour and mysteries of the universe. For some reason I kept the northern lights in your fine verse - thank you Connie - Lindsay

Joseph May March 18, 2022 at 4:11 AM I enjoyed this cosmic beauty Connie, best wishes

Mark Woods March 12, 2022 at 9:23 PM Love how you've used the alliteration here. Simply splendid. It's nice to be back and reading good poetry like this.

Geoffrey Brewer March 7, 2022 at 5:59 PM ‘Vibrant and blissful’ indeed, Connie. Dreamy lambert imagery bringing peace and stillness to the mind. Lovely writing! Connie.

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2022 at 9:03 PM wow, this is so unique. I bet it scores high, Connie!!! Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2022 at 1:19 AM Thank you Andrea. I hope he likes it. We shall see. I still have some of your poems to catch up on. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker February 24, 2022 at 1:12 PM Overwhelming poem, Connie. Full of the mysteries of the cosmos and very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing, Bill Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 3:16 PM I appreciate your kind comment Bill. Thank you. We shall see. Blessings xxoo

Alexis Y. February 24, 2022 at 11:11 AM Wow! Connie, You have penned such a well-written write for the contest theme. I enjoyed your descriptions of the cosmic galaxies. With your chosen words it looked stunning. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 3:15 PM Thank you Alexis. I will need a lot of luck. : ) Blessings xxoo

Rico Leffanta February 24, 2022 at 10:42 AM Even in Hawai'i, the view is not as clear as it was decades ago. What a shame future generations can't see that so they understand what pollution does to their world. Enjoyed, Connie! Aloha! Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 10:54 AM So true. The dangers to this earth have been caused by humans. Thank you Rico. Blessings xxoo

Anitha Jayasankar February 24, 2022 at 8:28 AM Aw Connie, the cosmic theme and that of the harmony of the heaven wisely chosen by you to create this lovely write for Seeker's contest...and wow the use of alliteration is amazing...Best wishes in the contest dear friend...Hugs...~ Ani Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 10:53 AM I love star gazing and so I had to try to write about the heavens for his contest. Thank you for your lovely comment Anitha. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George February 24, 2022 at 8:19 AM I can only exclaim Wow.... !The celestial spheres filling the universe's firmament with a quiet blissful vibrancy..... ! Best entry for the contest Connie! Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 10:51 AM The cosmic clusters and their colors are really amazing. I have the astronomy magazine. Thank you very much Valsa. Blessings xxoo

Swetha Vangaveti February 24, 2022 at 6:41 AM I read this at the right time, standing on the terrace right now under the night sky. Wow!! Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 7:36 AM How sweet your comment is to my heart Swetha. Here it too is still dark but close to dawn. Thank you so much. Blessings xxoo Swetha Vangaveti February 24, 2022 at 6:41 AM May be, while I read this aloud, the sky too said, WOW.

Vijay Pandit February 24, 2022 at 4:47 AM Enjoyed your journey through cosmic wonders in the sky, Connie. Always an amazement to look up there at night-- dreams that resonate in harmony--as you say. Much bliss you convey my friend. Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 7:39 AM Thank you Vijay. The sky, our last frontier! Have a great night. Blessings xxoo

Joseph P. DiMino February 23, 2022 at 6:57 PM Beautiful writing. Profound. Right there, in our heart's eyes and almost beliefs, yet remaining a true reach until actually, entirely, fully knowing. Will always be someway ahead of us. looking off endlessly into an ever expanding universe. Love it! Joseph P. DiMino February 24, 2022 at 6:47 AM "Star Gazer" Listen to the sky- night and bright leading the eye- wells of dark deep with glitter, the speckled mind of a scholarly sitter- What does he expect to hear? Rhythmic run between sight and ear- shooter faint but clear of distant hollow to a crater near. Connie Marcum Wong February 23, 2022 at 8:01 PM Thank you Joe. I have always been a star gazer. The night sky is so clear here. We can see billions of stars. Especially notable are the shooting stars. Blessings xxoo