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Future Suture - For Contest

FUTURE SUTURE The past gaining ground old fools look back failing to outrun the future. Not the first, not the last. we are the present’s future past 5/10/2016 submitted to – Future – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 5/13/2016 2:44:00 AM
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John, congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/12/2016 1:27:00 AM
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Witty write, although short in words the ones written have a huge impact on the reader! Congrats on your placement
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John Lawless
Date: 5/12/2016 8:20:00 PM
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Well, Brian, sometimes shorter sentences can make for longer thoughts...
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/11/2016 7:53:00 PM
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Very clever play on the tenses to bring out the in"tense"ity! Nicely stitched together, too. Congrats on your win, John. ~kc~
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John Lawless
Date: 5/12/2016 8:19:00 PM
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Thanks Karam, I love playing with the words and the language.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/11/2016 1:32:00 PM
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John, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/11/2016 1:25:00 PM
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Congratulations John on the placement of the contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/10/2016 9:25:00 PM
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John, I love the last three stanzas good luck in the contest :-)
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John Lawless
Date: 5/12/2016 8:18:00 PM
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Thanks Eve, always good to hear from you.

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