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Funny Experience

Inside the classroom full of students The teacher teaches about patience But there were some lazy group Noisy and talking about the latest scoop The teacher’s patience’s exploded Beauty on her face was faded The student’s attention are focused To the person in front of the board Silence filled in the air Listening to their beloved teacher Word by word they’ve learned But one student fart loudly at the end Bursting with laughter's inside the room It’s like time bomb that really boom The teacher who is very angry Comes back with her natural beauty Because of the sound she hears You can see her eyes with tears It’s not sadness but pure happiness And the class were dismiss……. For PD's Contest 8th Place Winner

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/20/2013 6:28:00 PM

Congrats, Maria. Nice going. Well done. hugs, Ralph

Len Gasun

Date: 3/19/2013 7:04:00 PM

Hello my dear friend Maria! My biggest hearty congratulations on your win too! Cheers! Thank you so much for your congratulatory comments as well. I'm just peeking at soup. We're at school tour now. Very far from Bangkok. Tom. will leave the country but we'll be back at weekend. We'll change hotel today and then go around the place. Again, thank you so much! Take care! love lots, Leonora

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/19/2013 1:00:00 AM

Many congrats for this funny write and win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2013 6:36:00 PM

Maria, thanks for the chuckle and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/2/2012 11:14:00 AM

One class clown always brings such laughter, always, any other time, everyone would have thought him diisgusting.. guess timing is everything~ You made me laugh, thank you, Cindy

Bradley Cox

Date: 8/26/2012 5:17:00 PM

very cute thank you for sharing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 11:03:00 AM

Gosh, this is unusual. I don't think I ever had a student fart loudly after I spoke. that would be really weird!!! your title is most fitting on this one, Maria!!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 12:11:00 PM

thanks friend Andrea...(^_^)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/26/2012 6:15:00 AM

Too funny...excellent imagery here!!! I work inside a school so its even funnier because I can relate...you're doing good Maria...keep writing!!! Hugs

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 12:07:00 PM

thanks friend Pace...cheers!! (^_^)

Don Johnson

Date: 8/26/2012 3:57:00 AM

yes it funny surely is, love it babe ...it lovely is

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 12:07:00 PM

thanks if it makes you smile friend Don :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/25/2012 10:54:00 PM

You have a definite advantage over me. I cannot write anything in Thai. You have written decently well in English.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 12:05:00 PM

thanks friend Robert...have a nice day!!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/25/2012 3:46:00 PM

Lovely rhyme Maria! Love how you've brought out the different emotions of the teacher by describing the expressions on her face. Nice!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/25/2012 10:25:00 PM

thanks friend Vicky...have a nice day

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2012 5:12:00 PM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..I can think of many reasons that she needed to dismiss the class..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/24/2012 10:43:00 PM

she/I dismissed the class coz its time already (^_^) hahahaha its break time...thanks Friend Sara..Have a nice day!!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/23/2012 11:36:00 PM

Wow! Excellent write my friend! I remember that I almost got the same experience as yours few years ago; the one fart, the other one who got the loudest laugh has cold and made a balloon out of his nose! lol. Good luck again.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/24/2012 10:39:00 PM

(^_^) thanks friend Nore...for yor support,,god bless you always!!