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It was good Enjoyed the time I've been called To the mother ship They say I can't come back For a long spell So sad So disappointing What is the worst I'll have to be working

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Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 7/27/2009 4:22:00 AM

nice write. enjoyed reading it. loved it. always, cherica lynn <3

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/19/2009 3:28:00 AM

Ah, yes. Work is the taskmaster of success. Very cute poem. Lovingly, Dane

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/18/2009 7:38:00 PM

Yes, the mothership of blood, sweat and tears. fun write. Thank you for taking time to comment on my work, always appreciated. Charlene

James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2009 6:02:00 PM

Made me chuckle Sara, nice write>>James

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/18/2009 5:28:00 PM

Very clever poem, Bill

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2009 2:59:00 PM

A very enjoyable, funny write! I like the idea of referring to the workplace as the "mother ship." Got a good laugh from this poem! Love, Carolyn