Fulton-Drought

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Constance La France

Date: 5/18/2010 6:38:00 AM

like to shape, like the words.. now for a challenge in my contest, What Is My Theme?.. write a letter to self. I invite you to view my poem called, The Letter, to see what I mean.. best of luck.. Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2010 4:11:00 PM

Love the shape...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/16/2010 1:37:00 PM

Need a question answered. Soup Mail in a moment, Brian.

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/16/2010 8:53:00 AM

Short and powerful as usual... enjoyed thids write here and have a great Sunday.:)

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/16/2010 6:49:00 AM

this is when we become couch potatoes lol loved this brian so much said in these few lines I still have to get my done but darn soup screwed it up by placing it off key not sure how to fix that so will have to try something else to get it centered great write keep up the great work

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/16/2010 3:32:00 AM

It's almost as if I can see the much-awaited rain pouring down in your shape poem, Brian. Nicely done! Best wishes, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2010 3:22:00 AM

What a wonderful expression of a thought