Fulton-Avalanche

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Michael Torres

Date: 12/2/2008 2:43:00 PM

Brian very nice fultan. So creative you are. Blessing's Michael

P Sheart

Date: 12/2/2008 9:51:00 AM

Hello Brian Every year I tell myself this will be the year I don't slip on the ice/snow but a year hasn't gone by yet where I haven't done just that. Enjoyed! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2008 7:57:00 AM

This was a great one! (Cleverly done, even if deadly!!) ~ Fondly...Carrie

Elaine George

Date: 12/2/2008 6:20:00 AM

Excellent!!!! Eaine

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/2/2008 5:40:00 AM

I love the snow but this is scary stuff. Excellent fulton. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/2/2008 5:14:00 AM

Well, my first thought for this was slipping on the ice, as I just did that not 20 minutes ago! as always, well done. love, Kristin

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/2/2008 4:50:00 AM

I haven't seen this form before (anywhere else but by you here on PS), and I really like it! What exactly are the rules for it? Just four words of four letters each, or is there more? The words you chose for this one are perfect for an avalanche. Just wonderful!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/2/2008 4:17:00 AM

Well Brian I am watching this one. I read it and immediately I am thinking alvalanche. Good job!

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/2/2008 4:10:00 AM

YUP !! , Sir Brian , Syed said it all .... It'snow joke ...

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 12/2/2008 3:56:00 AM

hey dude, amazing stuff! rock on man! :)