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'full Moon'

embrace the full moon it is shining just for you distance diminished

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 12:04:00 PM

i'm goin' i'm goin' missy! haha after I grab something to eat - I am hungry O_o see you next time okidoki? hugs :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/2/2011 5:10:00 PM

real easy to get caught up in that ole moon, Wilma. I do it all the time. It is an orb of inspiration

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/1/2011 6:40:00 PM

Wow, this sounds like the beginning of a avant garde song. There are so many ways that I could see this going. Regards, Gerard

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 2:18:00 PM

Ah yes the mystique of the moon and it's effects on love and lovers... brilliant Senryu Wilma.. and so enjoyed with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/25/2011 4:57:00 AM

Beautiful scene my dear Wilma... may I echo all the words below from my fellow poets...love Michael

Kash Poet

Date: 2/23/2011 4:00:00 PM

Amazing Senryu!Love it----kashinath

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/23/2011 12:32:00 PM

you have achieved a great impact here Wilma, i am happy to have read this write that is alive with the contradictions so true to reality, a 7.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2011 11:19:00 PM

oh MY, Wilma.this is one of your best senryu ever. The last line is outstanding!

James Peranteau

Date: 2/22/2011 6:31:00 PM

Ah ! How many poets reach for the grandest thoughs of the great white at nite ! Just lovely Wilma ! Have a fantastic night ! much love, james

David Byrne

Date: 2/22/2011 5:03:00 PM

the moon has a way of making individuals feel like individuals!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/22/2011 10:57:00 AM

There is always a magical feeling when looking at a full moon, Wilma. You did a splendid job with this senryu. If this is for one of the contests, I wish you success. Love, carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2011 8:54:00 AM

That would be a beautiful sight..One embracing the moon..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/22/2011 6:08:00 AM

shine on....

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/22/2011 12:24:00 AM

love this wilma, awesome. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2011 12:22:00 PM

I was just admiring the full moon last night-- it was really beautiful and your senryu is really beautiful too, liked how you say it's just for the reader :)-- but ahaha I missed out this evening since I was in lala land-- and heehee no really, that was my bad about the months ;) well enjoy the full moon -- hope it don't make you too crazy ;) hugs :)

James Fraser

Date: 2/21/2011 11:01:00 AM

Our lunar gem and lovely thoughts absorbed by your words Wilma, nice one....:)

Daver Austin

Date: 2/21/2011 10:58:00 AM

Did you know that there are little men flying around the moon called Moon Morgans. You can see them when the Moon comes close, "distance diminished." Love, daver

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2011 9:52:00 AM

Very visual write on the full moon, Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 2/21/2011 7:44:00 AM

Love it Wilma.So much conveyed in these three lines.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/21/2011 7:18:00 AM

so beautiful Willma