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Full Body Hickey

He sported a new hickey
I thought it rather icky
Right there on his neck
It made me a wreck
To kill that girl is tricky

Perhaps that is too dire
Will fight fire with fire
I’ll plaster her lips
And wiggle my hips*
Known to ignite desire

Revenge, they say can be sweet
Mine, a delectable treat
Full body hickey
Wasn’t too tricky
Now, MY poor boy she won’t greet!

*Reference to belly dance
For Heather Ober’s Make me Laugh Contest
July 2, 2013

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Richard D Seal

Date: 7/3/2013 2:35:00 PM

Full Body Hickey, hmmmm you are prone to overkill aint yer lol. Anyway my little Desert Orchid, I think its time you put this belly dance on you tube, just to see if you're as good as me lol. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2013 3:13:00 PM

Will let you know when the video is up. Once someone got it on film, but....hey...you got to be there to see it. Hope you're Ok, Richard. I miss ya.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2013 6:06:00 AM

The other girl doesn't have a chance.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/3/2013 2:34:00 PM

Sweet of you to write this! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2013 11:07:00 PM

Are you a belly dancer too. I used to take lessons!! This was cute. full body hickey sounds pretty risque!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/3/2013 2:33:00 PM

:) I must exaggerate to be funny, dear! Yes, I do love to dance and have been told I'm pretty good. Nothing professional, but music moves me! :) Thanks for the visit!

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/2/2013 10:35:00 PM

This is a cute one.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/3/2013 2:32:00 PM

:) My attempt at funny! Not usually my genre, but I've written a limerick or two!

Donna Jones

Date: 7/2/2013 9:42:00 PM

You made me smile..would love to see ya belly dance sweetie...maybe I'd join ya...:-) MD That is if you're talking about the wiggling genie kind! Haha

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/3/2013 2:31:00 PM

;) It sure is fun! I remember going to a costume party. I was one of the teachers chosen to do the judging. Once the music started, I was a goner. The students were shocked! Got a lovely compliment. Yes...I do love to dance. Come on over, MD...I will show you a good time!