Fulfilling Life - Collaboration With White Wolf

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An empty shell, abandoned am I left alone? left to sigh? I once housed a caterpillar an ambitious butterfly Now I miss my old cocoon and still cannot fly Come pick me up soar the skies create turbulence with you Leaving behind our worn-out lives morphing into something new *** September 19, 2017 Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White

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Date: 9/22/2017 7:47:00 AM
Lovely collaboration, Darren and WW:) wishful and sad, a tone I like :)
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Darren White
Date: 9/27/2017 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Jo, we loved writing this.
Date: 9/20/2017 7:34:00 AM
Wonderful work, congratulations on your beautiful collaboration...
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Darren White
Date: 9/27/2017 7:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie :)
Date: 9/20/2017 4:28:00 AM
Another excellent collaboration Darren and WW. I love the way you two blend...Maria
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Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Maria :)
Date: 9/20/2017 4:26:00 AM
I so wish to colour that butterfly in!!! LOL.
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Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:26:00 AM
LOL silly, go get your crayons and start colouring ;)
Date: 9/19/2017 7:44:00 PM
I love seeing what you two create together!! I need to go visit him and see if he has this one posted up at his own wall. VERY nice, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 9/19/2017 2:46:00 PM
A good piece of work.
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Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Patricia :)
Date: 9/19/2017 8:49:00 AM
Becoming something or someone new is not an easy task, but then most worthwhile things in life are not handed to us. An honest and inspirational write from you two, Whites.
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Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:29:00 AM
No, it isn't easy at all. But it all starts with an internal 'attitude' that you very consciously address.
Date: 9/19/2017 7:54:00 AM
A 7 for you two. goodluck!!~phatt
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Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thank you phatt :)
Date: 9/19/2017 7:39:00 AM
Short, deep, perfect. Wonderful pen. Metamorphosis for two. xomo x2
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Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:30:00 AM
Merci ma mo :)
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