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FULCRUM OF A ROSE
Line of inquiry: track where lies the fulcrum of the fragrance of a rose, then likewise find within, your soul. in dawn’s quiet hush morning dew clings to petals the fulcrum, the fragrance of the rose, lies here. ‘tis the scent of nature’s breath, a bouquet created when earth and light harmonize in silence. in siren song of morning dew the fulcrum, the fragrance of the soul lies here. ‘tis the scent of God’s breath, a festoon created when body and soul harmonize~ in silence. ‘tis the lightness of being, a balance created from the weight of unspoken truths. ‘tis hidden in the strength of vulnerability, a rising tide born of resilience where every tear becomes a river of wisdom. ‘tis pausing, seeking peace in the smaller things— a fleeting breeze, a rustling leaf, searching for understanding in quiet, sunlit beams. ‘tis not a place, but a journey a constant seeking like the rose’s petals, a gentle unfolding. breathe deeply, smell the fragrance within, for amid one's thorns and beauty lies the sacred garden, the fulcrum of one's soul. *Note to contest sponsor: When I ran my poem through an AI checker, it showed this poem was AI generated. It was not! I'm upset with the AI results. I place this poem in your hands for a decision. Thank you for reading and considering my words.

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Date: 6/15/2025 7:51:00 PM
This is awesome, Yellow Rose. An instant FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 6/16/2025 3:38:00 PM
I'm humbly grateful, Gershon, for the FAVE! Means a great deal to me. Grateful my words were meaningful for you, yellow rose
Date: 6/15/2025 7:06:00 PM
Dear Yellow Rose, I'm enchanted by the soulful, thoughtful beauty of your poem. Your last stanza is an exquisite finale aligning the scent of the rose to the fulcrum of one's soul. Stunning work! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/16/2025 3:39:00 PM
Wow, such wonderful comments, Susan. Thank you for connecting and for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate you and your sensitivity, yellow rose
Date: 6/15/2025 12:50:00 PM
Yellow, you’ve created a meditation wrapped in poetry. You’ve woven a piece that doesn’t just speak to the soul, it invites it home. Good luck on your contest entry.
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Date: 6/15/2025 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Mickey, for your heartfelt words and encouragement! I appreciate your reading my poem...color me grateful, Yellow Rose

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