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Fulcrum of a Rose?

To be fair, Shakespeare got the jump on roses and their requisite scents. It's bad enough we're out here pretending to compete with Ada Limón and Billy Collins, only to wax about the most clichéd organ in relation to the most common flower. A flower I can't even keep alive in the backyard but that somehow persists in the collective consciousness— hardy in symbol, finicky in soil— for more than a millennia. My first husband used to say I had a parts-per-million nose, could sniff out a broccoli lunch from two weeks ago if I kissed him. I rarely did, which is how I met my second husband— who said I smelled like ozone before a storm and meant it as a compliment. I used to believe there was something to be learned from that. But the point is, the guts of a thing— what makes it beat, or bloom, or cling to a wooden stick— is as a god, or how corndogs are made: they're ineffable.

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Date: 6/14/2025 4:21:00 PM
bravo! this is the opposite of a cliche - my vote for first place and very amusing. I think that you are kind of lucky in a way, in that your husbands all say funny things, but I would give roses, this - in the flower world, they are no slouches.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/14/2025 8:14:00 PM
Haha! Everyone is interesting if you're interested, even husbands. Although I have been exponentially lucky in that regard. Both amazing humans and the funniest people I know. Be well :)
Date: 6/13/2025 1:33:00 AM
Engaging read! I enjoyed your unique approach to the contest! Best wishes!
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/13/2025 5:40:00 AM
Aww, thanks, Karen. I'm not sure if I'll enter this version though. The prompt is really interesting and has made me think of a lot of ways to take it. I think I'll explore for a bit before deciding lol. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I really appreciate it.

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