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Fruit of the Vine

I fall, get up, fall again Where’s the pain in that My wife, with a pan, hits my head Numbed by the nectar in the vat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/17/2010 1:21:00 PM
Sidley you always make me feel good ! Very good !! Er, on the rating is 7 good or bad ? Ha Ha !
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Date: 10/17/2010 10:00:00 AM
Little advise stay away from the vine ;) witty one you got here. Interesting form also Sidney ;)
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Date: 10/16/2010 7:21:00 PM
funny!!! how are you? my e-nymph
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:12:00 PM
Great one..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:03:00 PM
Very humorous as as always from you, numbed by the nectar in the vat, hahaH, Sidney,
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