Frozen Sleep

A cloak of ice worn
Hastened Winters kiss bestow
Churning waters still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Goff Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:11 PM
nice!
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November 22, 2010 at 4:47 PM
he he he! i was thinking it would be about something else,, enjoyed the nature here,..p.d.
Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Your Haiku sure has captured the changing of the waters to ice diamonds > koolio piece Sharon >> James :)
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:00 PM
Exquisite expression with meticulously chosen metaphors. Thanks for your kind comment!
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Shar. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Nice metaphor you have penned for Frozen Sleep, Sharon
Campi Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 2:18 PM
An interesting penned poem. This haiku put a nice chill through me. A good read, nd thanks for your comment.
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