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Frozen Sleep

A cloak of ice worn Hastened Winters kiss bestow Churning waters still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2011 7:11:00 PM
nice!
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:47:00 PM
he he he! i was thinking it would be about something else,, enjoyed the nature here,..p.d.
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:26:00 PM
Your Haiku sure has captured the changing of the waters to ice diamonds > koolio piece Sharon >> James :)
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:00:00 PM
Exquisite expression with meticulously chosen metaphors. Thanks for your kind comment!
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Date: 11/9/2010 9:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Shar. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 2:52:00 PM
Nice metaphor you have penned for Frozen Sleep, Sharon
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Date: 11/8/2010 2:18:00 PM
An interesting penned poem. This haiku put a nice chill through me. A good read, nd thanks for your comment.
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