Frozen Silent Path

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Poetry/Verse/Frozen Silent Path
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1610-080-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, December 20, 2023
For the International Bitesize Contest No 79
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 01/08/2024

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"Has solitude ever led your steps down a forest path, to linger in tranquility?" Quote by _Constance In my dream... I am walking a frozen silent path, going deeper and deeper into a tranquil forest. Winter wraps me in his arms while his fingers caress, my hair, cheeks and lips, I want to reach out for him, but he has no substance .. yet, I linger with him all night

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/20/2023 4:37:00 PM

I love the surreal quality of your poem as you describe lingering with him (tranquility) all night. Brilliant!

Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2023 10:15:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the great comment and compliment, blessings