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Frozen Raindrops

My breath becomes visible when I exhale into the chill of the still, winter air but, I do not mind the cold. I hear nothing, but the solemn sound of silence as I stand in the middle of nowhere, with no one, looking straight up into a gray sky and seeing nothing, but a million snowflakes coming toward me. Tumbling, dancing, drifting, and finding their way to the earth. No, they are not just frozen raindrops. Each one is a miniature ice sculpture intricately carved by the hand of a master artist. Can it be, within the billions of snowflakes that fall each year, that no two are ever alike? While I do not have the answer, I enjoy pondering the question. I stand perfectly still, as if frozen in time, as the snow falls down, and sticks onto my hair, instantly aging me as my golden-brown locks turn white. Yet, I feel much younger than I am. I feel like I am inside a snow-globe that has just been shaken. I can feel them gently landing on my face, these delicate snowflakes tickle me as they get caught by my eyelashes. I just close my eyes and smile.

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Date: 8/24/2014 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Kelly; I, too, love that solemn sound of silence. Very nice phrase. The whole poem is a delight to read.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/30/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Faye. It really means a lot coming from you!.... Winter is one of my favorite seasons. There is just something so magical about the snow, and that peaceful silence when it falls.
Date: 8/23/2014 4:25:00 PM
simply stunning Kelly would love to have seen this at the top! Hugs jan xxx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/29/2014 6:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Your kind comments mean a lot to me! Hugs :)
Date: 8/23/2014 3:09:00 PM
I would have made the poem as a number one. It is charming. Love, Joyce
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/29/2014 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joyce. Your nice comments really meant a lot to me!
Date: 8/23/2014 8:43:00 AM
You seem to have a close relationship with snowflakes, Kelly! They make you ponder, they dance around you and they make you smile...lovely:) Congrats on another podium finish!! // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/29/2014 1:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind congrats and lovely comments, Paul.... Autumn is actually my favorite season, but winter is a very close second. Though we do have some harsh winters here in Wisconsin. The beauty of the snow is worth braving the cold! :)
Date: 8/23/2014 6:46:00 AM
- Love this one Kelly, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/28/2014 1:33:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments and kind congrats. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 8/23/2014 6:43:00 AM
Prodigious..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/27/2014 5:24:00 PM
Thank you once again, Sara. I always appreciate your kind visits!
Date: 8/23/2014 1:25:00 AM
Enjoyed the fine write on frozen raindrops. Congrats on the win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/27/2014 1:29:00 PM
Thank you for the kind congrats, Dr. Ram. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. I think it is one of my favorite poems that I've written, so far.
Date: 6/23/2014 6:43:00 PM
oh absolutely beautiful, I love the snow, and for it to be praise in your poetry, oh it is even more beautiful. miniature ice sculptures, a gift every single unique one! great poem I love it :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/26/2014 1:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Casarah. They really meant a lot to me!.... I love the snow, and winter is one of my favorite seasons. Being able to experience the beauty of it, is worth living in the bitter cold!
Date: 12/19/2013 8:06:00 AM
Congrats again Kelly, Nice win...Hugs...Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/21/2013 6:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Roger.
Date: 12/19/2013 6:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your well deserved win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/21/2013 6:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram!
Date: 12/18/2013 10:51:00 PM
Hello awesome Kelly, :) Stopping by with a smile... Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/19/2013 11:38:00 PM
Hello awesome Linda :) Thank you so much for honoring me with a placement in your contest! I do appreciate it!
Date: 12/15/2013 12:59:00 PM
A very nice win Kelly, I was able to put myself within your poem. And then, I closed my eyes and smiled....Hugs....Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/15/2013 10:59:00 PM
Thank you, Roger! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem!...Hugs!
Date: 12/13/2013 11:46:00 PM
lovely win my friend....PD
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/14/2013 9:55:00 PM
Hi, PD! Thank you very much, my friend! :)
Date: 12/13/2013 11:25:00 AM
Congrats to you..love the snow globe part. BG
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:20:00 AM
Wonderful descriptions in your nature poem, I really enjoyed reading this today. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2013 9:38:00 AM
Kelly i like this sort of research.I enjoyed reading this.Thanks for the support.(: ) Jenish.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/13/2013 11:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement in your contest! I appreciate the recognition, and I am glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 12/13/2013 8:27:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem on nature, Congrats, Kelly
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Date: 12/3/2013 11:21:00 AM
Again Kelly, You take me down the road of description. This is one of my favorite poems.....Hugs.....Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/3/2013 6:10:00 PM
Thank you very much for the fave, Roger! I really do appreciate it!
Date: 12/2/2013 8:50:00 PM
Kelly This poem makes me cold reading it. The imagery and descriptive words you used allows the reader to join you in this magical and delightful world. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Internet Friend poem.
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:55:00 AM
Great work that you have penned..Inside a snow globe..That would be an interesting world in which to live..I was delighted that you found my work worthy of a comment..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/26/2013 11:07:00 PM
I always return the favor to those who took the time to read and comment on my poems! You are always welcome, Sara!
Date: 10/16/2013 6:43:00 PM
wow, this may be the best of yours I have seen yet FAVE. (and I do not even like snow. haha)
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Date: 9/18/2013 8:52:00 AM
Your talent inserts a certain magnetism that draws the reader to the core of the poem. I loved the feeling of this poem. It beautifully displays your talent for writing. Thanks for your comments on "Twin Snowflakes." Ya knoe I love ya.... Jake
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:12:00 PM
No two flakes are alike, words to ponder on. Lovely work.
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Date: 9/13/2013 1:21:00 PM
MY BREATH BREATHES OH BEAUTIFUL PIECE KELLY
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Date: 9/13/2013 2:00:00 AM
- I save the summer heat .... will not be visited by the "Winter King" ... lol .. - A great poem my friend Kelly, good work !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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