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Had no snow to speak of in October and usually we get the snow that stays the end of October. Now I was watching the snow fall gently outside the window and it inspired this . Hope you all like it.

 

 

 

Frozen rain comes misting down,
Forming frost and crystals.
Sparkling like diamonds,
On the trees, the grass, the thistles.

It ushers in the winter snows,
That blanket all around,
Weighing down Fir branches,
Though they make not a sound.

No pitter patter as the drops,
Fall on my window pane.
No tap, tap, tap upon the walk,
As with the summer rain.

Harvest time is over now.
The fields are frosted white,
As Jack Frost covers everything,
In glistening sheets of ice.

Soon the mist turns into flakes,
That gently float to ground,
Making all a pristine white,
As the Snow Queen dons her crown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/15/2018 4:37:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Judy. I love it :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/18/2018 4:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Date: 11/6/2018 9:15:00 PM
And tada the snow queen appears. Very nice, Judy!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2018 9:42:00 AM
Glad your feeling better, Judy! Sounds quite painful!
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/7/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim. Glad you liked it and glad to be back. That ripped shoulder muscle did me I for awhile. Still not 100% but improving. God Bless, JB
Date: 11/6/2018 9:28:00 AM
This was beautiful Judy. I very seldom get snow where I live but your poem painted a picture that makes me yearn for it, if only for a few days.
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/6/2018 9:56:00 AM
thanks so much Chris. It's good to hear from an old friend. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/6/2018 9:56:00 AM
thanks so much Chris. It's good to hear from an old friend. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB