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Frozen In Time

I've been frozen for so long, your coldness cannot hurt me. I'm trapped inside of your closed mind, why did you desert me? My reason has been shattered, but my will is still intact, If only you would forgive me, you could put my pieces back. I know the errors of my youth, for you are ever present. Can't you see any good in me? Don't be blinded by resentment. So here I wait patiently, suspended from life's animation. Won't you please release me from your exalted expectations? Your love for me is hidden, it's been so well concealed, Happiness only comes, when your love has been revealed. Don't be afraid! Show your feelings! Open up before you die! Don't forget me, I'm still waiting for you, frozen in time. John Derek Hamilton November 23, 2015

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Date: 12/5/2015 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John! Well deserved :) *smile*
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2015 9:26:00 PM
Thanks Laura.
Date: 12/5/2015 10:19:00 AM
Unique take on the contest. Enjoyed reading your poem John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2015 1:48:00 PM
Thanks James for your visit and comment.
Date: 12/5/2015 12:48:00 AM
Wonderful poem and win John... big congrats!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Dr. always a pleasure.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2015 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Dr. always a pleasure.
Date: 12/4/2015 11:49:00 PM
John, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks SKAT always nice to hear from you.
Date: 12/4/2015 11:08:00 PM
John, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Linda for sponsoring these interesting contests, and for your kind consideration.

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