Frozen

Frozen and still.. Artic cold winds blow rapidly.. Strong winds whistling.. Loudly.. The wind cries.. As it strength roars in fury.. Blown away from the intense force.. To run for cover.. Escape the wrath of the winds Frozen and wind blown from the forces of Mother Nature.. I found my shelter.. As I feel warmth and security.. Though frozen I still am.. I remain in a state of melancholy.. The cries of the wind matches the tones of my cries.. My eyes sting painfully As if a bee sting had stung them Tear drops roll slowly down my cheeks.. Eyes blurry.. I dry my tears.. The winds no longer cry.. I no longer cry.. In my somber moment there is complete silence.. So peaceful and quiet.. To reverse my state of frozen inertia.. Followed by my sorrows.. I am in prayer mode.. I pray... As I surrender .. I feel a warm loving breeze.. Surrounded me in divine love.. Though I no longer cry tears of pain.. I now cry tears of joy.. As I am held.. In the loving arms of the divine light..

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/10/2019 10:24:00 AM

You came through the wind and cold, into warmth and light. Always a difficult journey.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/6/2019 7:45:00 PM

'Vintage Robertina,' as a often say: Moving from the brink of disaster to sublime elevation. Always inspiring, my friend. Blessings and joy, Gershon

Silent One

Date: 1/27/2019 3:02:00 AM

Beautiful ending... Great use of metaphors.. No one wants to be cold..

Robertina B.
Date: 1/29/2019 1:51:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness and visit, Silent One.. Appreciate it!! Have a Blessed day, my friend..

Eve Roper

Date: 1/26/2019 10:13:00 PM

No longer tears just emotions of love of the Lord. Nicely done , Robertina. Hugs Eve~`*

Robertina B.
Date: 1/29/2019 1:49:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely words and visit, Eve.. Have a blessed day, my friend!!

Warren Doll

Date: 1/25/2019 11:42:00 AM

From mortal to immortal, so well written, Robertina. I love the last stanza. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Robertina B.
Date: 1/29/2019 1:48:00 PM

I appreciate you dropping by with your kindness, my friend.. Thank you!! Many warm wishes to you!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/23/2019 12:44:00 PM

Inspiring spiritual poetry that carries someone to realms unknown to mere mortals! Superbly written dearest, Robertina! A Fav for me!

Robertina B.
Date: 1/23/2019 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so much for your amazing words and visit, dear friend Demetrios.. I am so happy, this is a fav for you.. Greatly appreciated!! Have a blessed day..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/22/2019 1:22:00 PM

I love the transformation that takes place when we begin to pray, Its as if a light opens and we are not alone anymore. Prayer can be such a comfort when the soul is in grief mode. Thank you for sharing your heart today, Blessings, from my home to yours, straight for your heart. Here it comes xo

Robertina B.
Date: 1/23/2019 1:36:00 PM

Blessings from my home to yours, dear Pixie.. It truly is a blessing to interact with you on this wonderful site.. Thank you so much for your support!! Means so much to me.. Have a Wonderful Day, my friend..

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/22/2019 12:19:00 PM

A beautifully written poem with such a positive ending!

Robertina B.
Date: 1/23/2019 1:32:00 PM

Hi Heidi, Always a pleasure to receive your lovely words and visit, dear friend.. "Thank You" .. Have a blessed day!!