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Frosty

Frosty He can’t feel his fingers They’ve gone numb He built a snow girl a beautiful one Fashioned with snow He gave her soft mitts She’s perfectly sculpted with ruby red lips He kissed those red lips brought her to life Sexy with curves Would she be his wife When things got hot She melted in his arms I guess in the end She succumbed to his charms.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/18/2024 12:34:00 PM

Loved this Richard! Pangie xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/15/2024 7:20:00 PM

What an inventive poem Richard. The fantasy woman whose visage left at the height of ecstasy. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2024 7:12:00 AM

Thanks Linda. ;0)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/10/2024 1:06:00 PM

Where is a new poem, dear?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/10/2024 10:31:00 PM

Posted. ;0)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/2/2024 8:56:00 PM

Adorable, Richard. Always wondered when that manly 'Frosty' was going to get it on. lol. Thanks for the 'entertainment tonight.' Excelsior! ~ Gershon

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2024 2:52:00 PM

Thanks for Gershon. I appreciate your humour.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/2/2024 4:01:00 PM

lol what a lovely play on words Richard, " melted in his arms !" or course she did, :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2024 2:54:00 PM

Thanks my friend.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 6/1/2024 12:02:00 AM

This is such a lovely refreshing write enjoyed reading your poem many blessings

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2024 12:19:00 PM

Thanks Yolanda.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/31/2024 4:14:00 PM

How cute! I mean... not the fact that she melted, but the whole poem has a cute feel to it. I enjoyed this. You certainly know how to heat things up, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2024 12:20:00 PM

I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs Rick.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/30/2024 12:42:00 AM

He might have had numb fingers, but certainly did not lose his romantic touch and charm! ~ Best regards, Richard // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2024 5:21:00 AM

Thanks Paul. Best regards to you as well.

Tom Woody

Date: 5/28/2024 6:51:00 PM

Who knew he had a love life? Cute rhymes Rick

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2024 5:22:00 AM

Much appreciated Tom.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/27/2024 4:45:00 PM

Nice oxymoron of a poem, Richard. A hot frosty! I enjoy reading your latest poem, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2024 5:22:00 AM

I guess it is *lol*.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/24/2024 12:56:00 PM

Aw, such a delightful romance! If Frosty can get his snow-girl to melt in his arms he's definitely doing something right, though the joy can be short-lived in matters of love and/or snow. A wonderful piece and an especially wonderful last stanza for a thought-provoking finale. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/25/2024 6:08:00 AM

Much appreciated Susan. ;0)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/24/2024 11:07:00 AM

Ahh what a charming, romantic, poem, Richard with a touch of "frosty" humor for good measure! I love the underlying intimation that she will be back every year from the first snowfall to spring! So delightful! So clever! Does absence make the heart grow fonder? Hmm. Blessings to you!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/25/2024 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Sam, it was a fun little one to write.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/24/2024 5:05:00 AM

Dear Richard, I enjoyed this light and very humourous poem. I loved the analogy of the snow girl melting in his arms - very clever, and then she slipped away. Hugs Maria

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/24/2024 6:23:00 AM

Thanks Maria, have a wonderful weekend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/23/2024 7:33:00 PM

Funny. It makes me laugh. There are so many silly clichés, but who doesn't use them in a poem?

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/7/2024 11:37:00 PM

I don't see clichés here and don't remember writing this comment. Well maybe I read something else it was meant for. Anyhow, it is a cute story.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2024 7:44:00 PM

Happy to entertain. Thanks for reading and commenting.

William Darnell Sr.

Date: 5/23/2024 6:10:00 PM

I feel warm and fuzzy now because it was beautifully romantic, even for the snow girl. I enjoyed reading your poetry, Richard. I hope your evening goes well! Warm Regards, William

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2024 7:44:00 PM

What a nice thing to say.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/23/2024 5:26:00 PM

On the surface this poem is clever and witty. But I also found it soft and romantic and evocative. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2024 7:44:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I had fun with it.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/23/2024 3:22:00 PM

Dear Richard, I love how you beautifully captures the fleeting nature of love and creation. The wonderful imagery of the snow girl melting in his arms reaches deeply, reflecting both the joy and sorrow of impermanence. It shows so extraordinarily well moments when I've held onto something or someone ephemeral, cherishing the warmth even as it slipped away. Thank you for this touching and evocative piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2024 7:43:00 PM

Your comments always bring a smile. Much appreciated.