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Frosty

Frosty 

He can’t feel his fingers
They’ve gone numb
He built a snow girl
a beautiful one

Fashioned with snow
He gave her soft mitts
She’s perfectly sculpted
with ruby red lips

He kissed those red lips
brought her to life 
Sexy with curves
Would she be his wife

When things got hot
She melted in his arms
I guess in the end
She succumbed to his charms.

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2024

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Rowena Velasco Date: 8/3/2025 7:51:00 AM A charming and clever winter love tale with a touch of magic and humor! The melting twist at the end perfectly captures the fleeting nature of fantasy and desire. Login to Reply

Marikate Kingston Date: 6/6/2025 8:54:00 PM Lucky girl, or shall we call her Frostina? and her lover, Frisky Frost, only because he sounded a little frisky to me. I think he was attracted to her frosty ruby drippy lips. Did she wear a long orange nose, that in this chilly weather froze? This poem was a cutie, just a cutie What a fun thing to write about! Tee,hee. I just loved it. It gave me romantic chills Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/7/2025 3:13:00 AM Great comment, thanks for your visit.

Byeol Captain Date: 2/27/2025 7:33:00 PM It's a nice one, beautifully described the moment. Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 7/7/2024 1:57:00 PM Ah, another cute poem, Richard- the end stanza was great Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 6/18/2024 12:34:00 PM Loved this Richard! Pangie xx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/26/2024 11:00:00 PM Thanks so much. ;0)

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 6/15/2024 7:20:00 PM What an inventive poem Richard. The fantasy woman whose visage left at the height of ecstasy. :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/16/2024 7:12:00 AM Thanks Linda. ;0)

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/10/2024 1:06:00 PM Where is a new poem, dear? Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/10/2024 10:31:00 PM Posted. ;0)

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/2/2024 8:56:00 PM Adorable, Richard. Always wondered when that manly 'Frosty' was going to get it on. lol. Thanks for the 'entertainment tonight.' Excelsior! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/8/2024 2:52:00 PM Thanks for Gershon. I appreciate your humour.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/2/2024 4:01:00 PM lol what a lovely play on words Richard, " melted in his arms !" or course she did, :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/8/2024 2:54:00 PM Thanks my friend.

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 6/1/2024 12:02:00 AM This is such a lovely refreshing write enjoyed reading your poem many blessings Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/1/2024 12:19:00 PM Thanks Yolanda.

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/31/2024 4:14:00 PM How cute! I mean... not the fact that she melted, but the whole poem has a cute feel to it. I enjoyed this. You certainly know how to heat things up, Richard. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/1/2024 12:20:00 PM I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs Rick.

Paul Callus Date: 5/30/2024 12:42:00 AM He might have had numb fingers, but certainly did not lose his romantic touch and charm! ~ Best regards, Richard // paul Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/30/2024 5:21:00 AM Thanks Paul. Best regards to you as well.

Tom Woody Date: 5/28/2024 6:51:00 PM Who knew he had a love life? Cute rhymes Rick Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/30/2024 5:22:00 AM Much appreciated Tom.

Bill Baker Date: 5/27/2024 4:45:00 PM Nice oxymoron of a poem, Richard. A hot frosty! I enjoy reading your latest poem, my friend. Have a great week! Bill Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/30/2024 5:22:00 AM I guess it is *lol*.

Susan Ashley Date: 5/24/2024 12:56:00 PM Aw, such a delightful romance! If Frosty can get his snow-girl to melt in his arms he's definitely doing something right, though the joy can be short-lived in matters of love and/or snow. A wonderful piece and an especially wonderful last stanza for a thought-provoking finale. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2024 6:08:00 AM Much appreciated Susan. ;0)

Sam Kauffman Date: 5/24/2024 11:07:00 AM Ahh what a charming, romantic, poem, Richard with a touch of "frosty" humor for good measure! I love the underlying intimation that she will be back every year from the first snowfall to spring! So delightful! So clever! Does absence make the heart grow fonder? Hmm. Blessings to you! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2024 6:09:00 AM Thanks Sam, it was a fun little one to write.

Maria Williams Date: 5/24/2024 5:05:00 AM Dear Richard, I enjoyed this light and very humourous poem. I loved the analogy of the snow girl melting in his arms - very clever, and then she slipped away. Hugs Maria Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/24/2024 6:23:00 AM Thanks Maria, have a wonderful weekend.

Hilda Greenhough Date: 5/23/2024 7:33:00 PM Funny. It makes me laugh. There are so many silly clichés, but who doesn't use them in a poem? Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 6/7/2024 11:37:00 PM I don't see clichés here and don't remember writing this comment. Well maybe I read something else it was meant for. Anyhow, it is a cute story. Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/23/2024 7:44:00 PM Happy to entertain. Thanks for reading and commenting.

William Darnell Sr Date: 5/23/2024 6:10:00 PM I feel warm and fuzzy now because it was beautifully romantic, even for the snow girl. I enjoyed reading your poetry, Richard. I hope your evening goes well! Warm Regards, William Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/23/2024 7:44:00 PM What a nice thing to say.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 5/23/2024 3:22:00 PM Dear Richard, I love how you beautifully captures the fleeting nature of love and creation. The wonderful imagery of the snow girl melting in his arms reaches deeply, reflecting both the joy and sorrow of impermanence. It shows so extraordinarily well moments when I've held onto something or someone ephemeral, cherishing the warmth even as it slipped away. Thank you for this touching and evocative piece. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/23/2024 7:43:00 PM Your comments always bring a smile. Much appreciated.