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Sorrow is the outcome of sheer human weakness, and your brain is your most potent weapon.( By Poet)
Frost flaring fain azures bloodshed still happening deep yarns from the seabed wary musings dumb way, house forsook lacking dad. Frost flaring fain azures basic way of zest here There is thirst to owe more greed's pang seeks its vengeance, leeway in one's whole core. Frost flaring fain azures pane in world's breaths and spells but thaw the blaze that shines on the tracks prime to zen, yet they gaze at feigned shrines. Frost flaring fain azures each one can grasp the truth the heat's hoary brightness Induce us with its hand In a glove openness.
Written: April 5th, 2022 1st place contest winner Checked by: HMS.COM Form M - Monchielle - New Poetry Contest Theme: Death Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/17/2022 3:36:00 PM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your beautiful poem and I love your quote and image ~Constance
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Date: 4/16/2022 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 4/15/2022 1:58:00 PM
Back with congrats on your winning work. Thanks for dropping by and letting me know I placed in the contest. Sara
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Date: 4/15/2022 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on this "Frost Fain Azures" win. Love your quote. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
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Date: 4/15/2022 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, this is very moving
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Date: 4/15/2022 12:44:00 AM
Back to say a big congratulations!
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Date: 4/14/2022 10:28:00 PM
You have beautifully said how to conquer sorrow in your inimitable style ! Congratulations on your great win dear friend !
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Date: 4/14/2022 8:37:00 PM
"Frost flaring fain azures" - Great refrain. Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/10/2022 4:43:00 AM
Creative work for the contest. It is sad to see the heartbreak of war. So many unnecessary deaths. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2022 4:55:00 AM
Profound thoughts on the pain of death and loss. I really like this form of poetry; I haven't seen many poems written in this form. Another wonderful match of poem and photo. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 4/8/2022 8:11:00 AM
Great poem and quote, Lasaad:-) A sure winner!
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Date: 4/6/2022 8:19:00 AM
Very well written, GL in the contest
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Date: 4/6/2022 5:20:00 AM
Your repeating line sets the scene, Lasaad. Your poem--deep in thoughts.
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Date: 4/6/2022 1:40:00 AM
Well written. My muse have left me. This is not so difficult as it seems but I simply cannot get going. You did well.
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