Get Your Premium Membership

Frost

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Jan Allison.


Try a QuincrosticainContest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich 09/23/23

 

Freezing conditions, the ground’s now icy white, Roads may be slippery, so take care on that hill. Oh look, Jack Frost came to visit us last night, Seeing feathery ice patterns gives me such a thrill, That drop in temperature, brrrr I feel the chill!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/10/2023 3:34:00 PM
Hi Jan, October seems to be forging its way quickly into winter. The picture and your poem are a winning combination! - Gail
Login to Reply
Date: 10/9/2023 8:07:00 AM
I'm heading for a nice, cozy blanket and hot chocolate now Jan. :) Congratulations! :) ps: I think it will be awhile yet for us to see this kind of temp/ frost in East Texas LOL
Login to Reply
Date: 10/9/2023 7:23:00 AM
The chill is on its way, Congrats on your win Jan
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2023 11:35:00 AM
CUTE one, Jan. Thanks for trying out this form in my contest. I love the picture you put with it. Congrats.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2023 10:28:00 PM
Beautiful acrostic, dear Jan. Feathery ice patterns give a great thrill ! This time winter will make an early onslaught, I heard. Great image of Jack Frost and a great entry. All the Best.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2023 4:16:00 PM
I sincerely liked your Acrostic...it describes winter and Jack Frost's arrival, right down to the chill. I'm not a winter fan but of this poem I am :-) Enjoy your evening, Sara PS the pictures were perfect.
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/25/2023 4:53:00 PM
thanks so much sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/24/2023 12:23:00 PM
not too soon I hope Jan, very picturesque and brrrrrry cold !
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2023 12:44:00 PM
thanks Vie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/24/2023 6:14:00 AM
Vivid picture of Frost. Enjoyed each line. All the best. Love.
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2023 6:17:00 AM
thanks Anisha, we have stormy weather here today thankfully so sign of ice or frost yet but it is decidedly autumnal today:-0 hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 9:50:00 PM
I enjoyed this a lot, Jan. Thank you for sharing. :)
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2023 5:04:00 AM
Thanks Evelyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 9:37:00 PM
Loved this, even Soup seems to getting Frosty :)
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2023 5:04:00 AM
thanks Art, yet i noticed the atmosphere is decidedly chilly recently:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 3:24:00 PM
IDK when I'll see winter again.
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 3:33:00 PM
Its autumnal here on our little island, wet cold and miserable but thankfully now frost or snow yet. hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 1:48:00 PM
a delightful winter poem, jan! best of luck in the contest...
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 3:33:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 12:44:00 PM
No matter how poetic, Jan; I'm not looking forward to a cold winter :(
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 3:32:00 PM
Thanks Jeff, its cold wet stormy here and I long for the few summery days we had lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 11:17:00 AM
In 90 degree weather here, Jan somehow you made me feel the chill in the air. Good job.
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 3:31:00 PM
I wrote another one but thought it best to put this one in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 10:35:00 AM
A good one Jan. Good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Jerry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 10:27:00 AM
WoW! Jan, This is a good entry for the contest. Fun wordplay. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2023 10:18:00 AM
fun
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Karen:-) hugs Jan xx

Book: Reflection on the Important Things