From the Crow's Nest, That April Night

The night was perfect
on this unsinkable boat
as the man in the crow’s nest
kept watch.
He fumbled to find
his binoculars,
but they were gone.
“It’s okay,” he said,
vowing he’d do
the best that he could.
The vessel sailed,
The Atlantic
dark as the sky;
the waning crescent moon
had already set.
The surface of the water
was as smooth as a mirror,
and as he blinked his eyes
he envisioned couples dancing
in opulence below deck.
Some mate had told him,
they’d make the crossing
in record time.
He thought of his wife and children
waiting back home,
thinking once he’d make shore
he’d wire them to say
it was a glorious journey, indeed.
Until something loomed ahead
like a ghost.
He squinted and squinted
to see what it could be.
He thought that it could be
something or nothing;
the mate had told him
the waters were clear,
but when he notified
the captain,
it was too late.
He and 1500 others died
that April night,
but some lived
to tell the tale.
Three nights later
the stars shone on his grave
on the shores of Newfoundland.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/18/2021 9:36:00 AM
The tragic tale so well penned... from the beginning till the end... Very descriptive Mike.. God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 11/19/2021 12:52:00 PM
Mike, this story, narrative poem held me, mind and heart, from the start. Super rhythm and imagery. I also liked all references to sight and its lack. Very talented pen!
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Date: 11/13/2021 10:03:00 AM
I agree with Paulette. Could be the script for a movie!! A different one from the short poems you usually eat!!
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Date: 11/13/2021 9:20:00 AM
Hi Mike, You could have written the script for the movie.... Great Write! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/12/2021 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Mike!
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Date: 11/12/2021 10:52:00 AM
I enjoyed your free verse architecture and flow on the tale of the Titanic. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 11/11/2021 10:34:00 PM
A tragic incident. Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/11/2021 3:12:00 PM
Poor fellow... Forgot to call for Ghostbusters! ~ Bill Murray
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Date: 11/11/2021 8:56:00 AM
A story well told, Mike. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 11/10/2021 9:14:00 AM
Guess this is about the Titanic. Or it could be another ship. Your writing is fabulous. Deserves recognition.
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