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From Our Balcony We Stand

From our balcony we stand, a still horizon in view United in love, standing so proud beside you Lunar she is, amidst the deepest of cobalt blue Her crescent in bloom reminds me of you This vista we witness on this most special of nights As we turn to each other viewing this wonderful sight Slowly we dance with the grace of a swan Entwined like two crescents to well into the dawn From our balcony we stand, the same still horizon in view United in love, standing so proud beside you http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/lorena.php

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Date: 7/16/2011 8:34:00 PM
lovely vibrant vivid images James of emotion and passion .. created so sweetly from deep within.. thankxx for enjoying my words as well luv..
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:55:00 PM
Such a lovely verse on a loving relationship. Beutiful visuals throughout. Love, Elizabeth :)
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Date: 7/16/2011 8:46:00 AM
a lovely picture, james. Is it for any contest?
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James Fraser
Date: 7/16/2011 8:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, it's not for any contest to be honest. I hardly enter any now. I just enjoy writing every so often. Many thanks for your always kind words :)xx
Date: 7/16/2011 7:03:00 AM
Hmmmmm Sounds like a wedding night. Lovely God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:14:00 PM
A special night with your special lady. Awesome love phyl
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:45:00 PM
just lovely James
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:32:00 PM
Reads like a beautiful night with a very special person..A crescent moon aglow against a cobalt blue night sky must be elegant..Sara
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